Eleta laughed and lifted high on her knees once more. She continued to taunt him with shallow, unsatisfying strokes. Her eyes met his, and they both grinned as she allowed only the tip of his cock into her heated slit. They could both hear the sloshing sounds of her arousal.
"Eleta," Rafe said in a warning tone. "You know better than to tease a hungry wolf." She shivered with arousal, and his grin widened. He gave her bottom a sharp slap. "Now ride, woman! You're driving me insane with desire."
As she complied, he teased her further. "Dwayne? Dragomir? Dudley?"
Eleta's musical laughter echoed through the meadow as she rode them both to heaven.
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Author's note: I hope you have enjoyed Eleta and Rafe's story. I love getting your feedback, so please feel free to contact me directly through Literotica to let me know your opinion of my work. Thanks for reading. Lynn Coppersmith
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well done
you have always written the best stories on literotica that I've ever read. your stories are well researched and take you into the time that it's set in. can't wait to read more of your stories.
Loved the story.
But if you are editing for publishing, the way she realized Livius was the enemy seemed very contrived. It came out of nowhere.
Everything else was great.
I loved your series so much haremgirl!
Welcome back with your exquisite story series! Please write and dazzle us with more!
A Lovely Story
A wonderful story with a plot that's fun when it needs to be and serious when it needs to be. The writing is lovely to read and flows well and the erotic scenes are nicely done without falling into repetition as many stories do as they get longer. Glad we got a happy ending and would love to see more stories from the author. Good job. What else is there really to say :)
5/5 stars - enjoyable from start to finishmore...
GREAT!
Very good story! Thank you for sharing!
Request/challange: a story with Sheikh and a blond...
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