The Fallen One Ch. 04

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Rashida is sterilizing an even thicker needle than the labia were done with. Then another swab with a pad on her nipple. Then she grabbed the tip of it with a set of clamps, and pulled the nipple taut. Using the needle, she worked it into the skin and pierced the first side and then I could see it poking out the other side, stretching it to a sharp point and then the skin broke finally and the point came out. She kept pushing until the thicker part had bored the hole wider, then took off the clamps and pulled it, stretching the hole wider and then with her deft hands, applied the ring and released the needle. Blood drops seeped out and ran in a rather gruesome looking display, until

she was wiped clean with another stinging alcohol pad. That really brought the Bitch to delirium when that hit home. Her eyes rolled back and she looked out of it. Rashida was a craftsman at her trade. She didn't pay the least bit of attention to the pain she had just inflicted, but set about getting ready for the next one. When she was, she repeated the proceedure in exactly the same way. Bitch had hardly revived from the previous on-slaught and this repeat just put her over the top and she was out. I would have thought she was used to this level of pain by now, of course, when I'm looking down at the pussy shot, she's flowing like crazy, making me think of orgasmic sensory overload.

With the job completed, the girls kept wiping, while Rashida brought the panties out of its box. She laid the lace work of siver and gold over the area where it would go and studied the placement of studs to loops. Satisfied that she had lined everything up according to the drawing, she put the panties back in the box and took out the bra from its box. She laid it over her tits and fit them into the mail links. Satisfied that her work matched the drawing again, she took it off and returned it as well. Then a smaller box came out and two pendants, about an inch and a half long, were inside. They were several ounces in weight and silver plated. A single half carat Garnet on the front of each one. I thought that fitting, being as that is Bitch's birthstone after all. She held them to the new hoops piercing Bitch's nipples and admired how they looked and all of them commented on them like they were earrings, saying how they looked like tassles and the weight of them was nice.

They went back in their box as well and Rashida handed them all to Rachel. She took them upstairs for later, when Bitch would get to try them on for the first time. They kept checking on Bitch to see she was okay and after ten minutes of groaning, she opened her eyes again. She looked down at her tits and cried when she saw the little droplets still oozing out from her. The stinging would keep her focused now and she wouldn't doze off now, until exhaustion would set in later.

The girls gave her a complete swabbing of every stud and piercing, bringing a renewed level of awareness to Bitch's body. The cool stinging must have been intensely vigourating and helped to brighten the redness. They left her to heal after a drink of water and a round of loving goodbyes with kisses and caresses, wishing her enjoyment with her new additions. Nastily sweet.

Rashida said goodbye to the girls, giving more attention to Carolyn, who was more demonstrative in her kiss. It was cute to see her standing on her tip toes and hugging Rashida, who was four or so inches taller, as well as three more in her heels. I was just about to switch it off, when Rashida turned and for the first time, looked into the cam and smiled at me and then blew me a kiss. A little wave and she's off screen. Damn is she hot! That's a woman I'd like to meet.

I'll close off for now and I'll pick it up again when Bitch's wounds heal and her ink begins. Take care and I'll see you back here soon.

Peace, Lance

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Sweet revenge

Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
HaHa that was SO bad!

The Bitch got away and they all spent the rest of their lives in prison. The bitch got some surgery and lived a happy life with all the money she got from all of them. The end to one of the dumbest stories I've ever read on this site. Even for fiction it was ludicrous.

cbrooks122000cbrooks122000about 13 years ago
Is there going to be a Ch. 04

Great story, is this the end? Hope not.

SubleeSubleeabout 14 years ago
paybacks

Now, I understand paybacks can be a bitch, but you go to far. I can agree the woman needed to be taken down for what she did to you and your son but there should be a limit. Enough already with your revenge and hatred. You think you would be satisfied after all you have done to her, she will never be the same again.

lance gtlance gtover 14 years agoAuthor
It does a body well to read such nice words

I have to tell you readers, the feedback has been overwhelming to say the least. I wasn't going to share my joy in taking my bitchy ex down with anyone, and just keep it a secret. But after all the great emails and comments, I'm so glad I did. I know you love to give me suggestions on what to do to her, but in real life, everything is done before I write about it. I've used several things only because it worked into her training in a timely fashion. As a sneak preview, yes, my girlfriend is taking her as her handmaiden and was treated to her own preview of what Bitch can do for her. If you have any ideas you'd like to share about her new life as one, please let me know and I'll pass them on to the girls so they can prepare her for them. As for the other things I mentioned about LMJ, that's a whole new story to write. She is awesome! Take care fans and stay tuned for more coming up soon. p.s. the ink work is amazing

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