Michael threw his arms out suddenly and shouted over the din, "I've changed my mind." Quiet reigned as he thrust his thumb towards his chest. "I know I'm at least a million times better than any one B'Amuf. It doesn't matter that you want to fight... I'm going to kill them all before you even make it out of your beds."
A wave of roiling displeasure cascaded out from the audience. They wanted a piece of the invaders. "No!" Michael shouted. "You're not hungry enough." He pointed straight into the camera and stated, "I don't see the resolve you need to stand your ground. How do you expect to win if you won't even try?"
The people in the square screamed, clapped, and stamped their defiance, doing all they could to convince him of their willingness to do battle. Michael closed his eyes and let the outcry of thousands of spectators wash over him. It lasted a full ten minutes. The entire world was going crazy as he stood silent, waiting.
Just as quiet had finally returned and people began to wonder if that was it, Michael's eyes flashed open and he told them in a deadly serious voice, "We will fight those that come to subjugate us. We will meet their ships and give them no mercy. We will show the galaxy what it means to face the might of Terra."
He extended an arm in a beseeching gesture. "JOIN ME, and together we'll burn down our enemies and scatter their ashes among the stars." He let his arm fall to his side and turned on his heel, the tails of his overcoat fluttering behind him. He walked off the stage, past the stunned Council members, and descended the stairs that led down from the top of the gate. As he reached the bottom of the steps, the first cheers began to ring out.
By the time he reached his shuttle, the crowd had erupted, the pandemonium spreading throughout the solar system. Michael had left them wanting. They didn't just have hope now, they were 'eager.' He knew he had awakened something in them that had been ingrained in the human race since Cain. Their bloodlust wouldn't be sated by the B'Amuf. He knew future historians would vilify him and condemn his actions today. They would call him a tyrant who incited an entire race to take up arms and kill.
Michael's composed, stoic demeanor lasted until the hatch closed behind him and then he collapsed into a chair, his features crumbling amidst the onslaught of weariness that assaulted him. One look at the pride that shown on Kat's face removed his doubts however, and stopped the weariness from turning to anguish. He didn't care what others thought so long as he still had her approval. The shuttle took off and Kat snuggled into his lap, letting him hold her while she nuzzled her face in the crook of his neck.
As the couple settled into a restful pose that soon saw them asleep, the world exploded into a hive of activity. Gone were the doubts, the depression, the inferiority complex. Humans had regained their pride and they now moved with purpose. They all believed they were unique among the stars. They would overcome any who threatened their existence and God help those who stood in their path.
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Your right anon:
The absence of 'no' does not mean 'yes', I fully agree, but in my experience if a girl does not want sexual advances, then she will always do something to stop or discourage the advances. Young Eliza here does not try in any way and in fact ENCOURAGED the two. She makes out with Kat, blows Michael: it was seduction pure and simple.
I mean; if she had not wanted this and was being forced don't you think she would, I don't know ignored Kat maybe. Every girl I know would have bit the dick off if a man tried to force them to give him a blowjob, they damn sure would not have willingly started licking it themselves. You say I defined her rape in my comment; how?
Legal rape is defined by sexual intercourse committed unwillingly either by physical force or threat of injury. Michael nor Kat ever threatened her, and she impaled herself on his prick. No force was ever used. She never tried to get away from Kat or Michael nor did she try to stop it. I would agree with you if she had been incapacitated in any way, but she was fully capable of showing in some way she did not want this.
Hell, in several points I have already pointed out she SHOWED she was a WILLING PARTNER. I understand where people are coming from in that the two treated her roughly, but rough sex does not equal rape. If that was so half of America, France, and England, and all of Russia would be guilty of rape. (I have never met a Russian woman that didn't want me to smack her ass while we were in bed)
Apparently the webmasters agree with me as any detailed form of rape is rejected on this site. If you think I_F went too far then report the story and let them decide on whether its really rape or not.more...
@silverwingeddemon: The absence of "no" does not mean "yes"
You're splitting hairs,and you sound like a drunken frat-boy trying to figure out whether he should take advantage of a girl who's passed out or not. What you, yourself, describe defines the legal definition of rape in the real world-U.S.. I wouldn't try to justify it, just take it as a fantasy and don't tell other readers it's not rape. It is, but it's also a fantasy so you can enjoy it.
Don't try it in real life, though, and if you do, don't be surprised if other people say you raped someone.more...
I disagree
@ cyberwraith
Maybe I'm just being blind, but this doesn't seem like rape at all to me. Dominating seduction maybe, but at no point does the copilot even try to resist, or get away from the two. Hell she licks Michael's prick herself first. The worst that could be said is Kat groped her, but then she started kissing her back. She even admits she enjoyed it,and while that would not excuse anything if it was rape, there is no point of the scene that correlates to 'rape'. Kat yanks her back and flips her onto the seats, but only after she seduces her from her own chair. The word 'no' never comes up, she does not try to stop the two...at what place can anyone point to and say 'here is where she shows or acts like she does not want this to happen'?more...
Why the rape of the co-pilot?
I like the plot line of the alien attack, the alien allies, and the defensive plans, but I don't enjoy or appreciate the violent sex. I want to quit reading the sex scenes and just follow the story.
To Mr. Brave Anonymous
I don't usually reply to anonymous posters since I know it'll be futile, but I'll try anyway.
1. I don't see any of your works either. So I guess you're unqualified to critique my critique.
2. I don't enjoy writing. I'm a reader and an editor. Saying I have no ability to critique a story is like saying a teacher can't teach written analysis unless they've published a novel.
3. I didn't tell the author how to write. I wrote an analysis of the character.
4. You didn't refute a single thing that I wrote. What was the point of your comment if you don't disagree with my analysis? Is it just because you can't stand somebody having a different opinion than you?more...
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