The Flavor of My Neighbor

Can't we find better things to argue about than local turns of phrase.

Gotta say I was a tad turned off by the un-invited nocturnal explorations.

"My Fair Lady" was not about a 'Human of the female gender'. It was about a female who, with Henry Higgins help, discovered she was not just a 'Flower Girl - or a street woman' but a true individual. In the 1960's - yes I was there - females were brainwashed to believe that 'lady' was demeaning and they were WOMEN! Well, I am from New Orleans - for 6 generations - and I know the difference. Why do speeches begin with 'Ladies and Gentlemen' and not 'Males, Females and Other'.

Yankee females take note: Southern gentlemen are very considerate.

To all who left feedback, thank you. I know I have a long way to go at this writing game and feedback only helps to improve things. I wrote this as a favor (an idea) from another lit member, it is way off my normal style of erotica. I understand that it is bases on a touchy subject, but it is important for new writers to venture out of comfort levels at times.

Feedback is always taken into consideration and noted for personal style improvement.

the last thing you do BEFORE you hit submit... is SPELL CHECK!

aside from that the whole rape thing is a turn off.

Use "little lady" much less. Check your use of tense; some combinations of past and present tense...distractions to a story with a great concept and good potential!