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I woke, showered too and then wandered out onto the terrace. Mouse had covered a sun lounger with a large white sheet that went some way out over the terrace too.
Red rose petals, hundreds of them, were scattered on the ground, some on the sunlounger and some on the naked body that lay there. Teri had her eyes closed, one leg bent up and over to one side and the other widespread, as wide as she possibly could, I suspected with her foot on the ground to the side. Teri was displayed for Mouse to draw and for me to see. Mouse was sitting naked on a chair, her pad in her hand, drawing feverishly. She didn't look away fro her work. She was drawing a person, a very important person and she wanted it to be right....for us all.
Magnificently arranged, I thought, as I leaned back against the wall. Teri opened her eyes, smiled at me and closed them again.
I wondered what hidden pleasures'Le manoir des plages d'hier' would bestow upon us that day. I may tell you one day but only if you ask me nicely. And only if Mouse agrees.
Au revoir, chers lecteurs. Baise-moi plus tard.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 19 years agoVery good depiction of life on Port Cros. But Tim and Mouse could have gone to Le Levant which is nudist apart from the military base. Perhaps they will meet Lyn and her families there.
Anonymousover 19 years agoOne of the best authors on this site. Very erotic images; I can picture Teri clearly in my mind. Your descriptions of clothing, food, etc. add a lot. Have not tried your other stories yet. I also am not interested in the incest or BDSM, but will try at least one.
A few things distracted me. Sometimes I would be engrossed in the story, but then would lose track of who was narrating and would have to go back a few lines to figure it out. The story wouldn't have lost anything had it just been Mouse's story.
The other thing is that it was so very odd that this young girl was the one who was so full of wisdom to impart to her elders. To me it would have felt more appropriate for Mouse and/or Tim to be teaching Teri about the nature of life. Finally, I thought it abrupt that Teri, this beautiful girl of only nineteen years, who "seemed shy," suddenly announced her ten questions, which she'd been thinking about since the year before. Maybe a "truth or dare" game might have seemed more natural and spontaneous.
Again, an excellent story. I wish more contributors wrote as well as you, and I hope you add many more stories, especially in this genre, sprinkled with some romance, as you did here.
Anonymousover 19 years agoThe incest angle isn't my kink, but this is a beautiful story. It's very well developed, without being overly long before getting to the intimate parts. You've done an excellent job of creating a sensual atmosphere. I'm not sure you need the multiple narrators, though.
Anonymousover 19 years agoLovely story very erotic and entencing to read on and on. Hope you will continue this one !
Anonymousover 19 years agoThis story shows how being yourself unashamedly brings you together. Very erotic & liberating.
