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Click hereHe sighed a huge sigh. "Jennie. Your first time?" She nodded. "But, I'm a dragon!"
"Dragon! She commanded. "Fuck me!"
This was the first erotic story i ever read it will always be my favirite. im a huge fanatic of dragons. so i very picky about not just pictures of dragons but of how dragons talk and act in a story. you have potential lots of it. you should write more stories with dragons. or countiue this one into more chapters. id like for you to go more into the dragons part of the world and more of the humans. just a lttle more description. good job , real good job
Forgetting that duplication, The story was great! Your writing and imagination puts most authors in here to shame. Just goes to show that stories need not be filled with gross sex and crude language to be erotic-(and fun!) I don't know what that other critic wanted for an ending; I thought yours was fine. But you really should try some more like this, its that good!
You've done well so far and i'm looking forward to another chapter, but you need to really read through your stories before you submit them. There were a couple of paragraphs the same, and although I think it was meant to be intentional, the way you wrote it was confusing. However this story has great potential and I hope you write another chapter.
I love dragons so this story works for me. But I want more. editng and spell check will improve the story. When will see more of this story????