The Honey Trap

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Penny turned to face me, and I saw that tears were running down her face. "Is that really true?" she asked me. "Is she really not your girlfriend?"

"No," I told her solemnly, "she was my partner in the honey trap we set for Frank and Melanie, but nothing more."

"But she's so beautiful," Penny protested. "I could never compete with someone like her."

Rhiannon walked over and put her hands on Penny's shoulders. "You silly girl, I was the one who never had a chance. He only had eyes for you."

Penny looked over at me again. "You mean you never even . . ."

Rhiannon interceded again. "No, Penny, he never did. I could never get his mind off you long enough to get his hands on me. And believe me, I gave him the opportunity."

Penny didn't say anything, but she looked at me with shining eyes.

Rhiannon grinned at us both. "I think it's time I got out of here. I've had harder assignments than this, but somehow this one has worn me out."

At that moment, Melanie picked herself up off the floor. "What about me? Where do I go? I can't go back to Frank's house, not after what's happened."

Penny looked at her thoughtfully. "I don't know what you're going to do tomorrow, but you can sleep at my house tonight. I'm going to go home with Michael." With that she kissed me soundly. I took her hand and decided not to let it go.

But something was bugging me, and I turned back to Rhiannon. "What about Frank? Where did you send him anyway?"

She laughed. "That was the address of a gay bar I know. I wonder how long he'll stay there before he realizes I'm not coming?"

Then her face lost its smile and she looked at me intently. "Good luck, Michael. You're a special man, and I won't forget you." She leaned forward and gave me a gentle kiss. I felt Penny grip my hand even tighter.

Then Rhiannon turned to Penny, and her face assumed a fierce expression. "You treat him right, you understand me? If I ever hear you haven't, I'll come back, and this time I won't take no for an answer."

The fierce expression left her face, to be replaced by a look I later realized was sadness. She reached out and patted my cheek. "But I don't think I'm going to get that lucky."

Then she reached into her purse and stuffed something in my hand. "Goodbye," she said, and then turned and walked out the door, her hips swiveling magnificently. I looked down at my hand. It held four unopened envelopes.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 hours ago

At about the third page I'd had enough of the presented personality of the primary character. all the stammering, the blushing, the self-doubt, the self-deprecation, the bumbling and stumbling.......I just couldn't spend any more time with this. I supposed your characterization of the main character was intentional. I hope it worked for you and you've gotten a high score and favorable comments. I confess to not being a fan of the "bumbling fool" persona. Yes, it's my problem.

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

How anyone can like this I don't know, it was a good idea trashed by a so so writer.

Oh, and by the way, it's 'couldn't care less' not 'could care less', think about it.

AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

I expected this story to be really good from the reviews. It is absolutely trash. The MC is so pathetic if I was his wife I would leave him too. He had to hire a escort to get revenge and even that was lame. Where is the revenge? Just awful story writing. Probably hoping to publish on Amazon with all the other third rate writers.

mfj77mfj77about 1 month ago

Wonderful story. Like others, I'd like a follow on story about Rhiannon. And a Penny and Michael story. Perhaps this I'd the mark of a great writer, to be able to create such great characters that we want more of the characters' stories.

Unfortunately, this story was written in 2012, and it looks like the author's last submission was in 2015. So it's not looking good for any follow-up. Too bad.

One of my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Thank you for a great story!!!

I think Rhiannon is the heroine of your story.

Please us more about her and how she ended up as a escort.

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