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Click hereThis was probably one of the hardest walks I ever had. After all. It now seemed possible that the magician wasn't insane. The gift he left me had fixed me up and I was stunned. No...I was curious. I wanted. No, I needed to more more about this 'power.' Perhaps it was time for my luck to change. First things first I had to head home and get myself together.
- COMMENTS
Remain_in_shadowabout 11 years agoUgh. Great premise, poorly executed. Couldn't finish it
scfasdabout 11 years agoAuthorYeah, sorry about that. Normally when I write it's always in third person so it was pretty difficult to try and get it completely in first person. I had to go over it a couple times and even then I didn't get all of the parts that were flipped around unfortunately.
treert1256about 11 years agoI enjoyed the story but I kept getting thrown off by the change in how you say..person, like first,second,third. Here is an example: "The words barely escaped his mouth as he flipped her on her hands and knees and thrust into her again, wanting to see her plump ass before I came."
