At six, the doorbell rang. Roger took a deep breath, knowing that this night could be one he remembered for the rest of his life.
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Not many writers have the patience to let things develop. You are letting them proceed intelligently. I don't give many fives. You've earned them.
Please continue!
I need the next chapter!! A little longer would be nice.
Please finish this
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I am enjoying this story would like to see where it goes.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh...the suspense!!!!
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