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Click here"Whoa." Matt whispered next to me.
I told him to shush, before I turned my attention back to them.
"Oh Christina... I'm so sorry I didn't tell you..." Holly whispered.
"What!" Christina said in surprise, "He would have killed you if you did. I'm glad you did at all!"
"Thank you..." Holly said.
Christina nodded. "How badly are you hurt Holly?" She asked in deep concern.
I watched as Holly took a deep breath before telling her to follow her to a dressing room in the closest girl store.
When they started walking, I gestured for Matt to follow me before following both girls to the closest store.
Holly's *P.O.V*
I now stood in a dressing room with Christina, I already told her not to freak out. But like always she said "No promises..."
I took off my shirt and pants to show her, I kept on my bra and panties. I heard her scream softly. She looked with wide eyes to all the scars from knives and bruises from punches and kicks. She gasped as she saw dried blood from my vaginal area, and then hugged me in her soft embrace.
"I am so sorry..." Christina said over and over again.
I couldn't help the tears that came, but Christina was there to comfort me in this vulnerable moment. She was the best friend that anybody could ever have.
"Holly... We have to go to the police for this!" Christina said hysterically.
"NO!" I cried, "He said he would kill me!"
"Holly! Look at you! When you go to the police they will automatically say guilty and he would go to jail! Then he would be gone forever!" Christina cried, "You're my best friend! I can't let you die!" Christina looked at me with sad eyes, before lowering her voice to a whisper, "Please..."
"Where will I go? I can't leave!" I whispered back.
Christina looked back at me confidently. "You will stay with us!"
I looked at her, and I knew I couldn't change her mind. I sniffed, "Thank you... I love you Christina... I don't know how I can ever repay you..."
"You don't have too... all you have to promise is that you won't get killed." She said comfortingly, "Promise?"
"Promise."
- COMMENTS
mokkelkeover 12 years agoa nice base to start the story.
but as resa said, if rape or so occurs, it is nice to give a proper warning, even if it fits the story.
my other remark is about ADD. if you want to use a certain condition, know the facts. since you say the girl is very hyper you have to use ADHD. ADD and ADHD are basically the same kind of condition, with the main difference being ADHD is the one where you are hyper, with ADD you aren't hyper at all. the main reason why i do point this out is because my own son has a combination of too and i did my research to know the differences.
resapooover 12 years agoThere should be some sort of warning for your readers that you have a non-consent scene in the chapter. I liked your story, but it was very disconcerting to suddenly see a child raped by her father.
spearman1over 12 years agoI was not expecting that much just in the first chapter but WOW!!!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter if this is any indication of what the rest of the story is gonna be like!!! Bravo!!!
