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Click here"Make haste Cameron," he snapped in a hoarse whisper, agitated.
Cameron shoved a final article of clothing in a satchel and headed towards the door. Always practical, only he would think of clothes for the chit. He waited impatiently as his good friend covered her with a blanket.
Shaking his head he slowly opened the door and looked both ways down the hall. All was quiet and undisturbed. Stealthily, he led the way out the entrance they had come with Cameron holding up the rear. Their horses were right where they had left them, waiting for their masters to return.
Neither of the men spoke as they saddled up on their steeds. Iain assisted Donnan with the girl while Malcolm said a silent curse, wondering what he had gotten himself into. Once all was ready, they rode off into the night onward to their homeland, Scotland.
- COMMENTS
Horseman68almost 7 years ago..... for another damned abandoned story. Not much of a loss as the male lead was written as a total ass.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoObviously,people are unaware of the phrase"sleep like the dead!!" There are indeed people who can fall asleep at the drop of a hat,and others who can sleep through hurricanes!! Love it,eagerly awaiting more!!
alreadytakenabout 8 years agoThis sounds interesting and I look forward to reading more. I'm especially interested to know his reasoning for this plan and how he thinks kidnapping is going to help garner favour from her family in order to stop feuding. I suppose her family would feel a need to protect her, but presumably it's just as easy to whisk her away from the Scottish countryside and let the clan go to war unaided.
Also, it does bother me that he would think all women are whores because he was too blind to see one woman just wasn't into him; this sets him up to sound pretty damn dense and I prefer intelligence in fictional (and real!) characters. Overall, though, I'll be keeping my eye out for "Chapter 1" because the story itself is intriguing and I hope these things will be overcome. Good work so far!
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI do find it a bit unrealistic she remained asleep during the whole thing, but I like it as a whole so far and I do think it's a bit reaching for him to assume all women are whores, even more so to assume she might be a white just because she danced with a man. Does he know absolutely NOTHING about British aristocracy and how these balls/parties work?
Aside from that I hope to see more from this story! Just hopefully more realistic where it should be.
