The Last Good-bye

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"Excuse me." A distant voice tried to interrupt our kissing. "What the fuck, I don't believe it, I solve all of their problems for them and save their marriage from extinction, and what happens, they totally ignore me." As she walked down the hallway we could hear her mumbling to herself. "I don't expect that I'll get any sense out of either of them for the next hour or so, so I'll leave them to their own devices and go off and call my husband." She reached the door to her room. "Knock on my door when you've finished." She yelled back at us.

It took a while.

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NeuroBillNeuroBillalmost 6 years ago
Fun

The environmental science was over the top and inaccurate but the intent was clear. The personal science was way over the top and fun. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Jeez

To my mind the whole ending was a total waste of time!

What would have happened if the 'friend' got him in to bed?

Was this a collusion between the wife & the friend?

If that were me I'd have been 'hopping' mad and told the two engage in 'sex & travel' -- 'Fuck off'!

She sets up her husband & the friend then tried set him up with sex & it's all been hidden under a bed 'somewhere'!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
quite a good story

with all the environmental stuff and very interesting....what I don't understand is why was his old girl friend at home with them...for what purpose was she there to be part of them or what???? you missed off the reason why she went home with them....or was it to escape her own marriage....if to reinforce their marriage then why did she try to seduce him even though she was talking to his wife who sorted that sexual predator out...very confusing

Yuri5Yuri5almost 8 years ago
loved the ending

what a twist, and the muttering at the end was awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
dickhead

yep the main character is a total dickhead , bit like the current duo running/ruining the country.....

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