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"Fuck. I think you deserve to be yourself and release some of that energy you're killing yourself with. Me too. We'll see who's fucking whom when it's over.
Christie leaned into me and our lips touched. Our mouths parted and our tongues encircled into their own dance. I couldn't wait. We parted and finished loading the car. The ride back was quiet but comfortable. We set a safe time. It would be the next week, Thursday. She would make the arrangements and let me know. In the safety of the parking garage we held one another's faces and came together for a parting kiss. The sound of her breath and the look in her eyes made me sad for my marriage. What has happened to Kim?
- COMMENTS
Effectover 18 years agoTrue it did move a little fast but nothing wrong with that. Clearly the marriage was in trouble and the comment about how his wife has lunch with other guys and does what ever she wants and basicly doesnt' want to be with him unless he is brining in more money then usually has me to wonder if she isn't already stepping out on the marriage and really is just with him for the money. That's how it comes off it seems.
Would like to see where things with him and Christie go. She seems like a good match for him I'd say.
Anonymousover 18 years agoSo far, this has a very real feel to it. It did move a little too swiftly in how fast their feelings and comfort progressed. However, the basic emotions of what is happening to Mike ring very true.
I also appreciated the length of your submission, it was long enough to build appropriately and involve the reader. I look forward to future submissions and wish you luck with this work.
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gizzmo301over 18 years agogood story about a marriage where both people give up and don't talk to each other about their feelings anymore. then someone comes along who listens.
