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Click hereAlan thought for a moment on his next question. Katie was right. This is kind of fun. He wondered what Rachel would say to some of these questions.
Katie beat him to it. "Have you only had sex with Rachel? Or have you two made real love?"
Alan again smiled at those memories. They were the greatest moments of his life.
"Yes. Have you?"
Katie shook her head. "No, unfortunately. I've never really been in love before. Again, never found someone I could really trust."
Silence fell between them again. Alan tried to think of questions, but wasn't sure if he really wanted to ask some of the ones he was coming up with. He felt himself approaching that tempting moment, since he was so turned on right now.
"Are you out of questions?" Katie asked.
"Well...actually, I'm kind of getting uncomfortable."
Katie tilted her head. "Why?"
"Well, I'm really turned on right now. Like, bad, and I feel like I'm being tempted, and will start asking questions that I shouldn't."
Katie eyed him with sympathy. "Okay, I won't push it, so don't answer it if you don't have to. What you and Rachel have going seems really special and I don't want to ruin it, so one last question and then we'll drop it. What is one of those questions? Is it to ask to have sex with you?"
Alan shook his head. "No. To me, that's a very fine line. No, I was going to ask you if you would touch yourself here in the car."
Katie nodded. "I guess I can see how you're getting uncomfortable. One thing can lead to another, and another, and another, until it gets out of control. Something like that could start it."
Now it was Alan who nodded. "Right."
"Yeah, I guess it wasn't the smartest idea to start with the sex questions. Now we're both horny and tempted. And like I said, I don't want to ruin what you have with Rachel, so I'm kind of facing the same temptation you are. To be honest though, I didn't think that it would go like this, it all just kind of happened."
Alan looked at the clock on the car. "Well, we did pass quite a bit of time."
"You know, you two have quite the sexual imagination."
Both Alan and Katie jumped.
"How long have you awake!?" Alan practically shouted.
Rachel opened her eyes and sat up. "Around the time you called our sex life 'mind blowing', 'out of this world', and 'excellent'. Sorry, I just didn't want to break the mood, and like you two, I was curious on where all of this was going."
Both Katie and Alan shrank, embarrassed. Like they've both been caught in the middle of public with their pants down. Rachel spotted this.
"I'm sorry Rachel. I-I went too far didn't I?" Alan said quickly, feeling the need to apologize.
Rachel shrugged. "There's no need to apologize. Talk is talk. What's more important is what you did, or rather, didn't do."
Rachel then smiled, and it was here that Alan noticed that her eyes had changed. Katie noticed this when Rachel looked up in the rearview mirror at her, and her eyes widened at the sight. So it really was all true.
"So, any questions you guys want to ask me?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI discovered this story today and have been thoroughly enjoying it so far, but you really botched the introduction of this new character, Katie.
1. - There is no reason for Katie to become part of this story. She was a kidnap victim tied up in the trunk. Rachel could have just fed off her in a couple of days and gotten rid of the body. Meals on wheels. Super convenient. She was already missing so it's not like anyone would be surprised if her body was never found. The entire justification for her joining their adventure makes no sense. I feel like you were worried that having Rachel kill someone would turn readers against her, so you made the victim a kidnapper to justify the killing. We certainly don't sympathize with the victim anymore. But now you have to do something with the girl, and if you have Rachel kill her too you are right back where you started. You should have at least addressed the issue of Rachel feeding on her. Maybe Alan could talk her out of it? Have her show some sympathy for the girl after she gets to know her?
2. - She is a kidnap victim, but this part of her backstory is never explored! How did this happen? Who was the kidnapper? Does she have family she wants to go back to? None of this is addressed and its absence is conspicuous.
3. - The topic of sex comes up too early. We barely know anything about her and immediately we start talking about sex and setting up the possibility for threesome shenanigans. It should have taken a few chapters for that to happen. She sees the relationship that Rachel and Alan have and wants to be part of it. Ease her into their lives. This is too fast. This story has felt very organic thus far, but this is the first twist that feels contrived and out of place.
On the whole I'm really enjoying this story, that's why I felt compelled to write this. It's like everything was going great and then suddenly logic went out the window and things started to go off track. I'm really hoping that things stabilize over the next few chapters and I can get back into it.
Kman4almost 13 years agoGreat story so far, and this chapter was really nice surprise.. hot, but a nice change of pace, and makes you wonder what's going to happen.
verbicidealmost 13 years agoEven with the episodes that aren't particularly erotic, this tale and the characters continue to be fascinating. Keep it up.
