The Lost Lord Ch. 21

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Rainer scratched his head, 'I don't understand? What circumstances?'

'...The [World] is in Arazra's possession. I cannot leave his side until I find a way to take it back. I am speaking to you now to give you some information. I originally gave you the [Emperor] for this purpose.'

Because the two were not speaking face to face, Rainer could not divine Zazie's true intentions from her facial expression, like if she was lying or not.

Zazie continued, '...Your friend, the witch, has been captured by Arazra's forces. They are under the impression she is some secret trump card you brought with you from the human world.'

Rainer stayed calm, though he couldn't help but twist his face into a snarl, 'I am not letting anyone die for this shit. I was brought into this cyclone of demonic politics because of some douchebag thinks his dad didn't love him enough and got mad. Tell me where Lauren is!'

'...That I will and agree with. Your friend is located in the tenth district's main encampment; she is bound to a magical Yew Spirit. It'll defend itself from anyone and attack anyone trying to free the witch. The Yew Spirit looks like a massive tree, I am sure you can tell what it looks like... If I may ask something, has the [Emperor] been of assistance?'

'Hm? Yea, it helped me cast magic that for some reason won't agree with me. Even though I'm supposed to be some sort of all powerful demon lord, I can barely cast any magic, the card helped with that.'

'...That is good. Very well then, I wish you the utmost of good luck and fortune.'

And with that, the presence in Rainer's head disappeared.

"Maaaaan, there are way too many people that can talk in my head. Still, I need to go rescue someone?" Rainer moved his head towards Asmodea, who was still regenerating. "I don't want you people to have me rely on you anymore. I'm sure as heck doing this myself. This [Emperor] ought to help me."

Rainer pumped his fist in determination. He had been in many do or die situations, with the majority of them coming to him since his revelation. Rainer wasn't afraid of dying, though he wished he were. He wished he didn't get this thrill form being in a perilous situation.

Well, why not indulge just this once?

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taco1085taco1085about 4 years ago
nice

this keeps getting better and better

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good but tedious.

Tedious battle scene.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I have this feeling

I feel like he is going to be one of those people who would go to war and fight bare fist. That being said if he had to have a weapon it should be those brass knuckles with blades on them. I feel like that would make him a total badass.

Hubbys_PrincessHubbys_Princessalmost 11 years ago
as a whole...

As a whole I love this story, as a previous poster already said you made a great start at building the world's of the seven deadly sins. And usually I love the amount of descriptive writing you put In your chapters. However I'm really struggling to get through the in-depth descriptions of the battle scenes and I'm sorry to say I ended up skim reading through a heck of a lot of this chapter as I found it tedious and over all boring. That said I'm looking forward to the next chapter and enjoyed much of the previous chapters. I agree that an editor would be beneficial to you as they would catch your grammatical errors. But personally on the whole I find it easy to over look them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great job

So far this has to be one of the best erotic stories I have read. I would rate it up with Cemetery Summons and some of the works on asstr. Keep up the good work and always strive to do better!

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