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"Your dress is in the wash," Rex said at last. "If it's ok with you, I'll toss it in the dryer when it's done and you can grab it whenever you're free."
I emptied my mug, feeling my face flush. "That sounds good." I ducked around the corner to wash out my mug, grateful for the darkness of the kitchen. Lord, he is affecting me strange ways. How mortifying.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoHey, somehow I stumbled across your fic looking for an ao3 story that I lost, but I have to say it was the best thing to happen to me. Such a well-written story with likeable characters and fantastic plot. I immediately fell in love with the story and your writing. I hope you keep creating wonderful pieces of fiction, because it's worth reading all time.
The_Duke_Is_Inover 5 years agoAuthorThank you everyone for taking time to give me feedback on my writing! It motivates me to write better : ) Sirwoodcutter, I hear you there with the short sentences, I tend to do that on my first run-through, and don't notice the cadence until I reread my work after a week or so of not looking at it. I expect I'll do a reread of my first chapter at some point and polish it up. Thanks!
renfrew_elitover 5 years agoI wasn't sure what to expect based on your intro but I'm glad I that I continued reading this fine story. Looking forward to more chapters, thanks for sharing!!
sirwoodcutterover 5 years agoAs I started I was a little unsure, the first few paragraphs seemed to be full of short sentences, lots of full-stops or periods depending on where you are from. It initally felt like I was being bombarded with short snappy sentences. I carried on and did enjoy how the story was progressing and look forward to reading your next chapters.
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou have got to be kidding us with that pre-story introduction. This is good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
