- Fetish
- The Modern Marquis
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Anne's grin broadened, heard the virgin's struggling grunts mingled with the soft crinkling of plastic. She stated, "Yes, Virgin, this is a sampling for the Marquis will surely put you through your trials." she wickedly laughed, loved the virgin's bodily writhing while pinned against the mirror, "He will likely suffocate you over and over without a bit of sexual fulfillment. So many ways he will take your breath and at moments will make you pass out only to do it over again and again."
"Correct," the Marquis agreed to Anne's clear statement.
Anne released the garment bag, watched the virgin drop to her knees in panic then fight to remove the bundled plastic. She bent and snatched the garment off the floor then demanded, "Get up!"
The Marquis was inspired by Anne's approach. He grinned with the visuals gleaming within his gray eyes.
The trials of the Virgin Mary will be epic, he praised to himself.
- COMMENTS
Thnx2KinkyStarover 8 years agoAuthorWell, to each there own, my friend. You have your opinion on what's erotic and what's not as I have mine. As does everyone on this site. You obviously don't approve of what I have written (props) and see it as trash but there are those who do not. I'm not going to argue. I made my point by publishing the second part to this story, DEATH is not involved. Please, steer away from writing (which I know you have & will continue to do so) and truly enjoy what you deem erotic because, warning, there is more of my trash being submitted.
:D
Anonymousover 8 years agoYour story has no sense, no purpose... nothing even mildly erotic about it... pure and simple trash...
(signed) Ms. Epic Stupidity
Thnx2KinkyStarover 8 years agoAuthorOkay, Epic Stupidity, (that's what I'm gonna call ya since you didn't have the balls to put your name) Why was it awful? Because you have the misconception that auto erotic asphyxiation aka breath play is always portrayed in association with death? Likely so. Or is it because of the Marquis DeSade reference? Or perhaps because there was no actual sex involved? And you've totally jumped the gun by saying "followed by death"... If you would read my other story The Professor's Pet, yeah, you'd see that I don't associate death with a fetish in which I practice and enjoy.
And yes, other Anonymous, this crap is dangerous and people do die when it's done improperly by inexperienced people or if it's done stupidly while alone or you don't have a trustworthy partner. And most of the deaths, were associated with the strangulation branch of breath play.. mine only associate with latex, pillow, hand over mouth, and all branches of bagging suffocation.
Those comments are why I'm putting these stories out there! Because people have the this misconception that breath play fetishes always have to equal death. I've been into this fetish for 24 years, I'm alive, and I still love this fetish because I know what it's truly about and understand it. I wish people to understand this fetish...
On a final note, If I hadn't put breath play in this story whatsoever... they would've been cool with it...
