Him: you are amazing...
I felt more red and heated with his words, he traced invisible lines over my face with a fingertip as I caught my breath and relaxed, then finally leaned to kiss me. We probably were there kissing each other like that for several minutes, when he parted his lips from me I could see him a little sored on his neck. He looked around us then back at me, and that smirk came back to his face.
Him: we should take a shower.
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I guess depending on the feedback and overall acceptance of this, I can write the second part of it. For the curious eyes, yes, he was real, and yes, we ended up dating for some time.
Love.
Caly
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Great Job
You worked the story nicely and I am looking forward for the second part if you chose to publish it. For English not being your mother tongue you do much better than some natives. Keep it up and brings us chapter 2 please.more...
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