- First Time
- The New Girl
- Page 2
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She started moving herself over my dick and every time our groins slammed against each other I got one step closer to cumming. We were both surprised at the pleasure this ancient art stimulated in our brains. Sandhya's movements got faster and faster as both of us approached our climax. In a matter of seconds we both exploded in our climaxes simultaneously. Sandhya had dug her fingernails in my skin deep enough to draw blood, both of us didn't realise it back then. I had exploded inside her as my cock had now been covered by blood and cum. She collapsed on my torso. I embraced her frame as she fell on top of me and drifted to sleep.
I didn't have sex that day I made love.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoIts actually feels real , can u post a part 2 with what happened next
Highlander76almost 7 years ago… but you need to even out the pace. The long buildup is very nice, but is exaggerated with "a few months" passing several times—that's just not credible with two young people so obviously attracted to each other. A few hours, a few days, but no longer.
The other thing I found rather irritating was your imprecise use of language and your idiosyncratic punctuation. Try re-reading your stories aloud, and note where breaths and pauses fall naturally. That will give you an indication of the placement of commas, breaks of sentences, and so on.
But I did indeed like it, and look forward to more experiments in the form!
Anonymousabout 7 years ago"She let out a sharp cry as blood trickled down my cock, I had torn her hymen."
So in other words not only did the hymen tear, but also the vaginal wall. The hymen doesn't have much blood. I wouldn't want to be her.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThere are a few things about this that suggest that this may be an adaptation of someone else's work, rather than a wholly origiinal story, however, that is between you and your conscience....
