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"Andrew!" I screamed.
"Evaline!" he cried. Andrew gushed his release and pumped me furiously, as if he was no longer in control. After a few more strokes Andrew fell and rolled to my side. He stared upwards, his eyes wide as if he was in shock.
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My heart slowed to a normal pace. I turned my head to the silent robot next to me staring at the ceiling.
"Andrew, are you okay?"
"Yes," he said, though his voice was faint.
"Are you sure?"
"I'll run a diagnostic," he said flatly.
The minutes stretched as he lay motionless next to me.
"All systems are functioning normally," he said abruptly.
"You don't seem normal at all," I said.
He sat up in one swift movement.
"I'm fine," he said. "Go to sleep. You have golf tomorrow."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoGood stuff. Excellent writing and a wonderful imagination. Thanks for posting. 5 stars.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoi like how the plot develops bit by bit every chapter.
MissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor"i was really hoping to be reading chapter 6 by now"
So was I. It's been in the moderation queue since 10/26. I asked Laurel about it, and she got back to me early this morning. Some of the submissions (I wasn't the only one) had technical difficulties. Her IT person told her not to post those stories until the issue was resolved. Happy to say Chapter 6 is now posted.
Thanks for reading!
Anonymousover 9 years agoWell i liked it - a lot! So im trying to get the word out (with last tritan folk) and now the people who read comments btw so happy you like my comment - and it's still all true you write wonderfully - but - i was really hoping to be reading chapter 6 by now (who am i kidding i want ch 7,8,9!!)) so is everything ok? When might the next chapter be submitted to the literotica queue? Peachfish
