She opened her eyes, raising her hands into the air. The glow in her eyes intensified and her hands began to glow pink as well. "I shall send my growing power out into the nearby lands. Twisting all of the plants, creatures, and sentient beings I can to my will. I shall harness Eczotl's dark magic and mix it with the Corruption that flows all around.
"All things shall soon center on this Northern Outpost, a great influx of events and happenings shall be drawn to these defenders of the realm, these Rangers of the north. They shall be tested and tempted, distracted by perversions that shall please my god and weaken their will untill I am powerful enough to reveal myself and make them my servants."
She tilted her head back and looked up at the ceiling. A beam of purple energy erupted from her eyes, shooting up through the stone floors and ceilings of her keep and up into the cold sky above. For a brief moment it lit up the night sky, showering the nearby mountains in purple light. Then the beam exploded, sending magical energy out into the lands surrounding the Northern Outpost.
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Amazing!
Absolutely love it!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
@hellinahelmet
Honestly I'm aiming for a bit more sex as the percentage of word count in future chapters. I think the next part will be majority sex, but I'm struggling with getting it all evenly paced out with things between the sex scenes to help break it up. And I'm not clear, are you saying I should be aiming for 30% sex or 70%?
Next part should be at least twice as long as this first one with four different sexual encounters going on. Still working on some world building and character introductions, but hopefully it will play out nicely. Trying to get the first draft done and sent to my editor before Friday.more...
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Let´s see where you take us from here...keep the 30 to 70 percent ratio of sex to drama or action, to keep it moving well and to keep us interested in the sex when you lay it on us...Thanks for contributing to Literotica...great place to hang your hat...more...
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