The Oldest Lifeguard

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"Yes, I decided that this wouldn't be his last summer—that he could be the oldest lifeguard for another year."

"You're just an old softy," Hank said.

Frank didn't give an answer to that, but he certainly had a thought about it. He'd had no intention of signing off on the approval for the application—not until this morning when that big bruiser of an enforcer for Mickey Bugoti visited him and told him he'd be giving Rob Styles any accommodation the oldest lifeguard wanted.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Have to agree with the others. The story was good but the sex was almost mechanical. Not what I expected for an erotic story but gave it a 3 for the plot and effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good twist...

... but the sex was so lifeless, I fell asleep midway through it. How was that supposed to be erotic?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Dry

This was fairly dry, not much emotion at all to it. Almost like reading a biography.

redzingerredzingerover 8 years ago
I was about to echo the age point...

...when I remembered that working in the leisure industry, anything past 30 WAS considered old. Hell, anyone past 25 was positively ancient in one team.

I enjoyed that, but didn't at the same time. You don't make your characters easy to like or empathise with, but I still felt sympathy for Styles.

legerdemerlegerdemerover 8 years ago
Gay noir?

Is gay noir a genre? I'm sure there must be something along those lines - this story certainly would fit nicely in it. From my perspective (rolling my eyes) I wouldn't have thought 32 was that old, especially these days - though truthfully I don't know if the story is set in the present. Well written, in your usual style. I could see it as part of something longer, or not.

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