Not knowing what else to do Donna stood in the spotlight as Andrea wound down the festivities. The crowd of prominent people, with tight schedules drawing them away, quickly dispensed and the hall emptied. The spotlights were turned off. Donna noticed that the male model had had a small athletic bag hidden on the stage. When the spotlight went dark he pulled some clothes out of the bag, got dressed, thanked Andrea, and made his way out of the hall.
Andrea turned to Donna as if seeing her for the first time and said, "Oh yes I owe you this don't I?"
She produced her purse and extracted the letters from Bob. In an empty metal trashcan Andrea burned them. Then she turned and eyed Donna viciously.
"That was my last obligation to you. As far as I am concerned we are total strangers from this point on. And if I ever find you within ten feet of Jack after today I will cut your tits off." She paused to catch her breath and then yelled, "Find your own way home!"
Donna screamed in fear, anger, embarrassment, and frustration as Andrea turned off the lights and strode out of the room.
The End
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Fair revenge theme short story but....
The whole thing seemed a bit rushed. The revenge theme is always ripe with promise. While that final twist was a cute touch, IMHO this story had the potential to turn far more dark and erotic.
Since Donna signed away her rights at the front door when they arrived, the auction didn't have to end with the last bit of clothes, did it? Imagine Donna's shock when she learns that bids will be entertained for a few other things -
--- sexy and humiliating poses - alone, with sex toys (they could be auctioned off);
--- a deep throat blow job that has to last for as long as the bidding continues or until the male erupts;
--- getting f*ked by the male model in several submissive positions;
--- a special APO (audience participation orgy) with the top five high bidders of a sealed secret auction. To Donna's dismay while she's recovering from a loud orgasm during the NC romp with the model, Andrea announces the APO winners and invites them all to a private entertainment room.
Bring on that final twist with the clothing after Donna's been used for hours, is completely broken and covered in come by her 5 horny companions with nowhere to clean up.
Clueless Donna wouldn't be told that Andrea carefully filmed the entire auction and APO from angles that won't incriminate any of the participants except Donna. Audio is edited so there's no sign that Andrea regularly ordered Donna to moan and loudly beg for more nor any mention of the Orphan's Charity, either. Perhaps a Chapter Two could detail Donna's exploits after she exits the auction house. The mind boggles.
Denouement: Franklin receives a copy of the film with an anonymous cover letter: "This is what your cheating wife does for entertainment."
Now, THAT would be revenge.more...
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