But that's another story - and if you ask nice, I'll write it.
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Top marks for invention
Debated long & hard with myself about the score for this story. 4 or 5? In the end, the sheer inventiveness of the game itself and the build up of tension and pacing during the first half of the story won out. Being nit-picky, for me the move from the big deal of showing naked flesh to acceptance that everyone could screw one another (with the exception of Cheryl's initial reluctance of Beth & Alex) was way too quick. The more believable the story, the more enjoyable for me.
The sex was also a bit too long winded and Denise went from not being able to take any more in her sore ass to seeking out Alex's cock with her a-hole moments later. Minor criticisms aside, it was a very enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop in the next installments. Thanks for your hard work & sharing your imagination and invention with an appreciative audience.more...
wow
I want a copy of that game for the wife and and friends
I want that game.......Please
Very nice.... Want a copy of the game.... Please... Yes write the story
Great Read!
I hardly ever finish stories over r pages but this one kept me the whole time, I am going to steal your game haha
Dez
Can I buy that game off you? Seriously. Make a copy for me for a couple of hundred??
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