The Perfect Game

byTx Tall Tales©

But that's another story - and if you ask nice, I'll write it.

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by Anonymous10/17/17

Do you have a fully detailed write up of the game, altogether? Could you post one?

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by Anonymous10/05/17

Characters?

On Page 5, you have a typo (...Debbie helped her guide me to the bathroom...). I think you meant Denise.

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by Anonymous03/10/17

Five stars

Very very good story, nicely narrated. Continue feeding us with such interesting and
pleasure giving stories on different themes.

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by amsterdam02/15/17

Top marks for invention

Debated long & hard with myself about the score for this story. 4 or 5? In the end, the sheer inventiveness of the game itself and the build up of tension and pacing during the first half of the storymore...

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