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"That our guy?" Davis asked still staring at the picture.
"Yep, if that's accurate no wonder we haven't heard from him. I wouldn't let a woman like that out of my sight for a second."
Davis nodded. "No question. Nobody mentioned a girlfriend did they?"
"Nope."
"Think it's connected?"
Robbins pulled off his patrol cap and scratched his head as he considered it. "Dunno. Probably ran away together. Eloped maybe. Can't say I blame him."
"No arguments there."
"Well, I suppose we're done here. We'll ask around about this mystery woman."
"Lucky bastard," Davis said enviously as they turned to leave.
Sunlight illuminated the picture they had admired. On it is a masterful rendering of the missing young man. With him is a stunningly beautiful woman. She is leaning into his embrace. Their arms are wrapped around each other as they stare out at the viewer. Their smiles speak of their contentment, his is one of barely restrained joy while hers is one of boundless happiness. Neatly printed at the bottom corner is the title of the piece:
"Complete at Last"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 14 years agoit could do with a proofread, but the story itself is exceptional
Anonymousabout 15 years agoWow. I'm really impressed. You are a very talented writer. Your attention to detail is wonderful and your descriptions are so vivid. Keep writing...and drawing^^
epicroseabout 15 years agoI was blown away by this story. Seriously, this is not even in the 'talented amateur' zone. Give it a quick spell check and it's a polished, beautiful and touching piece of art. Written by a dude too! I'd be fascinated to know more about this author. I haven't read all the stories yet and I guess this one is not purely for valentines but in terms of displaying raw talent it's a heavy hitter.
Bravo to you sir, please tell us more about yourself!
