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Good little slaves, now all three of you come and suck my cock. You will all look up at me as you give me head.
All three complied immediately. I filmed their every move as they crawled toward me on their knees. As each took a turn on my cock, I panned from left to right, and then I turned off the camera. Having just blown my load across Mallory's back, I had nothing to give them. I ordered my three slaves to stop and sit up.
Once they were all sitting on their knees in front of me, Becky asked, "What are you doing with that video, master?"
"You will see in due time, don't worry." I assured her.
With that, I emailed the video to my phone. Their boyfriends, or should I say soon to be EX-boyfriends, will be getting a nice surprise soon.
"It's late ladies, and I am extremely tired. You can stay if you want. If not, you are free to go home." I told them with a hint of tiredness in my voice.
I let them decide for themselves, and, needless to say we all slept together in that king size bed that night.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoI really like how the story is evolving. I'm just wondering when we might get new chapters.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoLook, I really enjoyed your story. But I have a request for you: don't make them exactly slaves. Maybe add some drama in it or something. Like making a teenage girl get all jealous or something. You know? Some action, drama and adventure. Make it more interesting than the old "touch-and-you're-my-slave" thing.
But overall, it's still good. At least I'm not getting bored of the same idea YET!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI think uve got good story script but I also think u should put more detail in! Your mind controlling people way to easy? I mean hav them fight u then all of a sudden then they submit to u! B abit aggressive n abusive n show them their place! In the last chapter u ended the chapter when u jus manage to mind controlled reeses mum Lynne! U should hav continued from there n tell us wot u got to know abt her?? U could bring that back n kinda reflect on her daughters marriage maybe get her to breakup the relationship of her daughter with her boyfriend! Hav them two doing an act?? Maybe control the a few teachers from Faye's children school including the head teacher?? Hav one of them coming home to do school work for children n at the same tym entertain Jeff n Faye!! Make the other slaves that jeffs made to come n do housework eg as servants!! Being a story into it!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoMind Control is a tough genre to get interesting characters into, just due to the nature of the premise. I get that. I kinda expect some focus on plot, as a consequence, though. He's done an awful of controlling people with his power, but all he's actually accomplished is to set himself up in a cushy life. Does he have any goals? Is anyone noticing people's various changes in behavior? Is anyone gossiping about their master? Is the source of his powers relevant to anyone else?
There's no shortage of compelling ways to take this story, despite the lack of characterization. But if all that's going to happen is that he randomly runs across women and has sex with all of them, then that's not cohesive story. It's a series of one-shots that happen to all occur in sequence.
