The Rak-Sasha Ch. 09

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"Why, you are the one who had some ancient demon monster controlling you? And who was that redhead with the wings and sword?"

"I don't know, but she saved us all. Our Amy, the one we both went to school with who hates cats, now has one that she named Azetlor. She even put his collar on it, that spiked one Sasha had on her pet."

"So she likes cat's now. Your brother turned into a humanoid crocodile, your father from what the neighbors say turned into a werewolf. While your mother became some kind of oversexed panther woman, and your more freaked out by Amy getting a pet cat?"

Erica laughs a little, looking at her phone as she scrolls through her contacts to see Amy listed there. Bringing up a picture of her friend next to that little kitten she just got, seeing the spiked collar on it. Now she seemed to notice the hint of red in the eyes of the kitten, thinking it just the natural reflection of the flash in the animal's eyes. Something in the back of her mind warning her that this ordeal may not be at an end, just then a low rumbling growl could be heard from outside.

Thinking for an instant that it could have been one of those humanoid beasts, she grabs Jake and holds him tightly before the sound changes. Revealing it was some car outside the house, sounding like it had pulled up next door. None of the neighbors having seen Sasha since that night, most of them figured she either left town or was destroyed with that other creature. It was something the town decided would be a secret kept should anyone come asking about that strange woman.

Trying to comfort Erica, Jake helps her up off the bed to bring her over to the window. Looking down at the street below to see what appeared to be Sasha's car parked outside her house, the two of them watching someone walk out of the house and return to the car. The blonde woman places a "for sale" sign on the front lawn before turning to look back at the house. From her window, both Erica and Jake could clearly see this woman in her black dress.

"No fucking way..." Erica whispers to herself.

The two watching this woman turn to look at them as if she heard Erica whisper, offering a slight smile and showing off her upper and lower fangs. Erica shakes her head a little, watching Sasha turn and get back into the car before speeding away. Jake just watches this car disappear down the highway out of town, hearing a noise from Erica's phone as they both look at it. Pulling up a new message from an unknown number, Jake smiles and shakes his head. "Relax, baby it's just an advertisement"'

Just as Erica is about to delete the message, she scrolls down to reveal a picture sent with it. The message reading "Baphomet invites you... " The building looking like a strip club with the word "Safari" on it in neon lights. Erica just stared at the image for a moment before a clawed hand covered in red leathery skin reaches out from her phone, downstairs Alex and Mary could hear things being pushed around upstairs. Thinking their daughter was spending some intimate time with her boyfriend, they decide not to interrupt them while hearing the screaming eventually stop.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Is there any new chapter coming soon or some new stories from you? I really enjoyed your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ending????

I really did not care much for the ending Did Baphomet reach through the phone and pull Erica and possibly Jake to where he was at? Your ending is like the famous short story "The Lady or the Tiger" where you leave it up to the reader as to how the story ends. Was Erica's body to be used again to bring a demon back to life as it was the 1st time? If you do continue this story, then you need to let your readers know of Erica's fate. What do Mary and Alex co when they find Erica's room wrecked and she and possibly Jake are missing? I would hope you would resolve this issue in further chapters of this series. Over all an excellent story and I gave you 5-Stars for each chapter. Wardmaster 91D70

FZYONEFZYONEabout 5 years ago

Very exciting series! Thank you for sharing this hot piece with us.

Rak_SashaRak_Sashaover 5 years agoAuthor
More to come? DEFINATELY!

Thank you, I can't tell you how much I enjoy hearing that others have found pleasure in my work. As for the series ending, the series may have ended but as you said... evil never dies.

Amy and Azetlor will return in later chapters, you'll find them to be a little different without Sasha involved in their lives. Your question about Mary is an interesting one, demonic possession and pregnancies are tricky situations to deal with. Putting them together adds a whole new layer of complexity, you'll just have to wait and see what happens to her.

I promise you this, you haven't seen the last of Ne'Kara... after all, her mother owns and operates a rather exotic strip club.I'll let you think about that possibility, enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More to come?

Let me start off by saying that this is by far one of the best things I've read here in a long time as it hit a lot of things I like in these types of stories but is this series ending on sort of an "evil never dies..." paragraph or is there more to come?

Biggest questions I have are: Is Amy and Azetlor still turning into cat beasts and having sex?, and more importantly is Mary cured like everyone else or is she still Ne'Kara because she is still carrying her and Rak-Sasha's child from chapter four? Because Mary becoming a multi-breasted cat demon mother of a litter of cat demons and continuing what Sasha started (maybe becoming a shemale herself to corrupt and impregnate other women in the town) would be a way of continuing the story if you are. Sorry for the long comment but that hanging plot thread at the end of chapter 4 with Mary pregnant is bugging me because it feels like a Chekhov's Gun.

Again I really enjoyed your writing and if this is done I hope to see more from you in the future but it still feels unfinished to me and a continuation would be good too.

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