"How much longer will we be in Kalaibo?" Scanlon mumbled from the backseat.
"Oh, no more than five days," Winterberry answered. "We have Shisa. Now we have to set up his communications and give him instructions and some guidance in protecting himself. At least four days, maybe five. Why do you ask?"
"The general wants to meet me at Kojo House tomorrow night. Do you mind if I meet him again?"
Winterberry just smiled indulgently. He was in a good mood. One way or the other they had completed their assignment.
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Corpse_rider made some excellent points. As well, I love the premise... would love to see a new draft, improved by Corpse_rider's suggestions as well as the writing experience you have accumulated since, or even just a sequel; more of these characters, or maybe new characters faced with a new dilemma in the same setting.
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