"Her is right here." I said, getting a laugh from Malcolm.
"Then she lays back and the camera just shows my hand between her legs and I get her off with my fingers. Then I'm hard again and..."
"You'll be hard again, after her blowing you?"
"Dude, please, I'm twenty." Paul said seriously, "And look at her! Never mind it's going to be so damn hot doing this." He grinned, "And if not she can always suck me again."
"Of course she can." I grunted, but it was getting me worked up. Mary you're a twisted woman, there was no more denying or even fighting that fact and it felt....liberating.
"Then I fuck her on her back and we do the positions you talked about and there you have it!"
"I think it's great." Malcolm extended his hand outward, "And what's the title mister director?"
"Oh." Paul thought then clapped his hands, "Mom wants the real thing!"
"Brilliant!" Malcolm reached across the coffee table and gave him a high five. "Kid, you could have a future as a script writer in this biz."
"No, he'll be a one shot wonder and stay in school." I pointed out.
"That's a yes?" Malcolm asked.
"Yes." I answered, at this point influenced as much by the growing puddle in my panties as any type of common sense. Paul's description had me planning on fucking him the second Malcolm left.
"Excellent!" Malcolm was all smiles, "So two movies and I will draw something up for you to sign assuring you nothing will ever be made public about who you are and my video is never to be shown anywhere."
"Fine." I nodded.
"We'll do mine....maybe this weekend?"
"Sunday works." I told him.
"Great, then we'll plan the other." He laughed, "Paul, I love your idea, we're going with it."
"I can see it now!" Paul put his hands up and spread apart as if reading a sign, "Mom wants the real thing! Starring Molly Minx in her final role."
"Again, kid you got the knack for this." Malcolm told him
"And co-starring in his first and only roll, the soon to be legendary..."
"Don't you dare say it." I warned him.
"Paulie Pounder!"
He clapped his hands and looked at Malcolm, who shook his head, "Paul?"
"You love it, right?" he put his hand up for another high five.
"Listen to your mother kid, stay in school."
Author's Note: Well if you made it to the end, congratulations, hope it was worth it for you. I've done quite a few mom/son pieces here, but to me never "The" story. I feel this was it and although it is a work of fantasy and fiction, I dosed it with what I felt was some harsh realism. Also....so how many of you recognized the Easter eggs I planted? Let me know if you did. It was a fun extra for me. As always thanks for reading, lovecraft68
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"anony'
Hate filling up a comments section with conversation, but only way I can 'speak' with you. I could not agree more about how this site is run. Think its bad for the story side? See what goes on the forum. The favoritism, politics and the blatant encouraging of bullying and abuse especially towards women.
No one got back to you because this site is maintained so poorly that the 'contact us' button has not worked in years. I believe this is on purpose to not get complaints and to hide from LE in regards to countless revenge porn violations and other issues.
Is there anything realistic about incest as it pertains to the fantasy on this site? Not much. I'm the first one to say 99% of real life incest is abuse and disturbing. But on a site like this or in e-books with this material its 18+ 99% consensual and just the fun aspects that seemed to have really started with Kay Parker so its simply fun here. Still better than non consent which is rape in real life and rape and abuse in fiction, but people still get off to it.
BTW lit says they don't allow rape....have you seen their non consent section? All you need to know about the hypocrisy here.
You should contact me through feedback with an e-mail I can respond to. Would like to continue this conversation.more...
LC, Anony 1/25
First, as far as ''faceless trolls" I'd LOVE not to be "anony". But the Geico cavemen could admin this site better. After months of trying them to get ANYONE at Lit to get me back in my jahoo account, I've given up. I can understand your frustration with some anonymous accounts, but I believe my commentary has been only about this story and nothing personal. Secondly, I'm not putting you or anyone down for having a real life incest event. I am certain however that "reality" isn't anything to do with incest for all but a small part of the planet. And I've grown frustrated with the way it seems to be cavalierly embraced on this site. Lastly, we'll agree to disagree on some things but you are still a very talented writer. Thank you for taking the time to respond.more...
anony 1/25
First off I have no issue whatsoever with your critique or opinion. I want to make that clear. I take the good/bad and indifferent all the same. I do take issue with it coming from anonymous. I take things a little more seriously when the other person can put a 'face' to their remarks. If that's snarky its because after 6 years of being trolled by faceless people fueled with bandwidth courage I have reached the point where its more and more annoying.
For reality well you have obviously never read SWB, As for something I like or experienced? Of course I enjoy incest, if I didn't why would I write so many stories which for the most part are fun and/or romantic? I openly admit to having the 'kink'. Have I lived it? No, not at all.
Reality in incest translates into it not being all fun and games and something about it being destructive...you don't think Mary's first encounter with her son was destructive?
As writers we interpret our visions in words. As readers you will interpret it in your way. Ten readers will have ten interpretations. None right, none wrong for anyone but them.
Thank you for taking the time to voice your take on things.more...
Anony 1/25 here, LC, enjoy many stories but you're replies ignore "reality"
You speak of these incest stories and being injects of reality. How?? 99.99% of the relationships out there aren't based on incestuous practices. It happens, but it's rare. The reality is the destruction that occurs when these relationships happen and fold under the public pressure or die of when the lust inevitably lessens. That's "reality" and to date I haven't read one of your stories that deals with it. Just admit it, it's something you like or have lived. Either way, it's not reality. That's just an excuse to rationalize the criticisms. This one is just especially sad and disturbing in the way it ignores the pain and destruction that's surely to unfold. Like Dan's advice, it's ignored for a momentary rush of pleasure and swept aside and ignored.more...
To the comments about sad and disturbing.
Thank you, its a compliment. I don't generally reply to comments, but felt the need on this. For people who have followed me early on here or others who have read my complete library(sturdy souls you are) I made my bones here with Siblings with benefits which was never overly popular, but was a dark grim tale filled with addiction, abuse, mental illness and a lot of violence.
Why? Because as much as I enjoy the fun fantasy style incest or the fluffy romantic style, I like going against the grain and throwing some -gasp-reality in and reality often times is not pretty.
Stories like Mama's Boy, That damn red dress, SWB and now Molly Minx they are all on the darker side and deal with not just 'hot incest' but real life issues.
So for those who enjoyed it, thank you. For the recent comments saying it was sad and too much? Thank you as well. My goal is to get emotional responses and strike a nerve from time to time. Your critique is my personal success.more...
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