I thought for a mere split second. "Yes, we are."
"Good. I am liking the new relationship paradigm." She closed her eyes for a moment wearing her satisfied smile.
"Ooo! Let's make a list of boyfriend/ girlfriend activities we can do! I am thinking we can . . ."
And I silenced her with my lips.
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Very Well Done
Scrolling through the previous comments I am saddened that no one has posted the man-card return address yet. The flashbacks were very emotional but beautiful in that they provided a mirror between the loss of Diane and the "return" of Jess.
Thank you for a great story that consumed a good part of the day putting me way behind on my to-do list.more...
Wonderful Romance
I can't believe i missed chapters 3 and 4 when they first came out. I'm so glad that you wrote Inside Out recently as it made me go to your member page and find these hidden gems. I'm sorry Jess had to get hurt in order for Stephen to give in to the inevitable.more...
A very good ending
Your story was quite predictable, but it resonated with me. I loved the development of his online dating profile and her 'helping' him. I loved the happy ending to this romance.
One of the best stories I've read
Thanks for a wonderfully romantic story with nice character development
Very nicely done; great balance, and control of the story. A very sweet romance.
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