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Pierced glanced over her shoulder, watching to make sure that the other cunts had managed to get Shrill out. "Sorry-"
"Shush. Are you okay?" When Alana nodded, Pierced's shoulders relaxed a notch. "Good. Don't think this gets you out of taking the rest of the bag."
Just a little bit left, anyway. Alana allowed herself to relax against the seat again, enjoying the idle way that Pierced stroked her hairline. An almost unthinking motion as the woman watched the bag empty.
When the swirling finally came to a gurgling halt, Pierced hummed. "I'm going to leave the nozzle in until you're ready to release. But first? First, you're going to tell me how you feel."
"Full." Alana's eyes slid closed once more so that she could focus on the sensations. "Stretched. I need to go. Want to ask if I can. Know the answer is no."
"She's going to do this to us, you know?" Pierced brushed her fingertips across the bulge of Alana's swollen stomach. Slipped them lower, between Alana's legs, massaging her clit. "But this? I'm the only one who's going to do this for you. Don't forget that."
How could she? "Yes, Ma'am."
"Next time I fill you up, I'm going to stretch you out on the floor. Make you eat me out." So long as Pierced kept rubbing her pussy, Alana didn't mind. "I'd say two orgasms for the chance to release is a good price."
Alana looked forward to it. Maybe not the enema part so much, but the chance to prove herself. Nurse Bri might be impossible to please, might mock how wet she stayed. But at least it seemed to be worth something to Pierced.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 7 years agoTo : alitanyofdesires
It has been amazing so far, both plot and kink.
Please keep it up.
Are you going to push the boundaries of this story?
The plot is set up perfectly for kinks such as toilet slavery, sensory deprivation and the more extreme side of bondage.
But that may not be your cup of tea (is it?).
It would be amazing to see Alana's dilemma over what is worth 1mil and to see how badly the instructors can break her trust in them.
I am very much looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
JS.
P.S.
If you could take the time to reply to this (in the comments of this or the next chapter) I would be extremely grateful to hear your answers.
alitanyofdesiresover 7 years agoAuthorLike the previous person said- they're free to leave at any time. No fighting necessary.
But also.... I'm curious as to how you read it and got the sense she /wanted/ to fight back at any point other than what Shrill did. and she probably would have if it'd lasted.
On a narrative stance, if I can be more clear about Alana enjoying most of it and wanting to see what will happen- I will. I want to. The set up of the competition is honestly as... dubious of consent as I ever go with. I'm not a fan of blackmailing or other types of things like that personally.
But her narrative does note multiple times her agency. She chooses not to set boundaries with them not because she'll go with whatever, but because she wants to see what they would do and because she has at least a vague sense of trust that if she said no and they didn't listen- there woud be consquences for them. She likes the idea of being dominated by a woman and she likes the fact that Pierced is nice to her when she's submissive. She is shown /making/ that decision. She literally gets mocked and has someone upset with her because she is enjoying it.
On a non narrative stance... it really comes off to me more like -you- wouldn't enjoy these things and as such are projecting on a character. And that's okay! You don't have to enjoy sexual humiliation and enemas. But you do need the self awareness to not be patronizing and say shit like 'woe is me' because it isn't what gets you off. I'm here to write /my/ fantasies and those of people who like similar things. I don't write other people's fantasies unless they pay me. Which.. you're not.
Anonymousover 7 years agoDid you read the first part? They signed up to be treated like this to win money. Hey are there by choice. It is also a competition where many have left and she can go anytime. Not a single reason to fight back. They are not being held there. Read the whole story and understand it before commenting
Sorry
