Finally, the lovers prove too exhausted to keep their position. Instead they retire to the large sofa in the adjoining TV room. James lies down first then pulls Tessa to his side and cradles her against him. With her free arm, Tessa pulls the afghan draped over the back of the sofa over her and James. Once covered, she snuggles contentedly into James's warm body. For that precious moment, all is perfect.
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So grateful!
Thanks for the positive feedback! It really helps my confidence as a fledgling writer :) I'll definitely work on sequels to this story - I don't think I'm quite done with James and Tessa. A warning though: it's going to get pretty dark before the happy ending. But I promise it'll be worth it ;) thanks again!more...
Hot story except that other were betrayed to the highest degree. They fall to their own spouses as cheating pigs and back stabbing friends.
Good Job
This calls for a chapter 2 and 3 keep going!
Great for a first story
I hope you'll keep writing! 3*
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