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Click hereDid I actually feel bad about the things I did to her? Hah... I don't know.
Was it hurting her? I looked up. Our eyes met, and I got my answer.
But then, we're only human...
"Do you want me to give you a bath?" I asked, kindly as I could.
"I'm- I'm good." She replied, cradling her arms around herself, pulling the gown around her.
Of course not, she'd probably think that might end up being a trap again.
"You're tired probably," she mumbled, not really looking at anything.
I wasn't. "Yeah," I said, getting up and turning to the closet. I took out some towels, and handed them to her. She looked at them, surprised.
"Well, I'll be in bed. Sleeping," I added, for clarification. She nodded, pulling herself off the floor, and went into the bathroom.
I lay in the bed, with my eyes closed, thinking.
After what seemed like a few minutes, I heard her turn off her lights, and felt her lying down beside me. So close, but I didn't dare touch her. Or was it the other way around?
I waited until I heard her snores, and snaked a hand over her waist, fingering her bellybutton. She moved, and I pulled her close.
Now I can rest.
A/N: Say It by Flume, Ft Tove Lo. Best lovemaking song I've heard in a while.
So? Are you happy now? She didn't cry this time. Got your questions answered?
As always, comments are my fuel. Please feed me.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI throughly enjoyed this chapter, It was cool to like kinda get into his head. I dont really find stuff repetitive, I like that it's just the 2 of them! Liam is so psycho, i love him. Kim has some kind of mental disorder, bipolar maybe she has multiple personalities, i just want one side of her, one moment she's strong and twisted and the next she's scared and meek, that's becoming a little annoying. Other than that I love this story, thank you so much. I can't wait for the next one!
Kimikimidollalmost 8 years agoAuthor@anon: yeah, I can see that too. But that's what you get with a couple, esp with these two, Kim and Liam. Do you think they'd ever let a third person in? Yeah, as a blood sacrifice, maybe... It could've gone into romantic pairings, but then idk.. I thought about changing the category every time I put up a chapter, actually.
@reality- remember, the harder you are, the easier it is to break you..
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoIt was amazing to know Liam's point of view and tbh i enjoyed it more than Kim's. But i think a few things are getting a little repetitive, we want something new. This one was definitely better than the last one. Looking forward to the next part!, (I believe that because of the long wait between the chapters, sometimes we, readers lose interest)
Reality_Contortionistalmost 8 years agoI hope the characters are staying true to themselves. I like Kim's tears and Liam's insanity. No need for unnecessary adjustments or restraints. This chapter from Liam's POV was not as terrifying as I expected but very nice, smooth and super sexy how he thinks of Kim.
Kimikimidollalmost 8 years agoAuthorHmm, let's see: she decided to hook up with Liam even though she saw how difficult he was; got forcefully impregnated; then had to deal with the knowledge of this alone for the next few weeks; almost got raped by two guys he'd just met (and still got back at them), got kicked out by her parents, and feels ashamed to face her friends, or ask for help because she feels responsible for her decision; then got locked up in a room and 'conditioned' to his will, and now she got some respite because her actual health might be in danger. Oh, and she misses her kitty.
Hmm.
Yeah, I think it's about time she gets to act as cranky as she pleases.
