The Solitary Arrow Ch. 09

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"Miss Hyandai?" Trevir's voice came from the darkness in his doorway. The moon was behind clouds and the yard was very dark. She must have moaned or made some noise he heard, and he knew it was her. She kept still and looked over toward the little servant's quarters. He was standing nude in the doorway, his young body bald and smooth. He looked like an elven lad of almost Hyandai's age like that.

He walked toward the outhouse and went inside. She did not like the little box much, but could see its usefulness. She slipped back into the house while he was otherwise occupied, and it was just as well, as the moon came from behind the clouds and would have revealed her had he come out then.

She went upstairs and found Harlen curled up in the bed, and slipped in beside him. He responded to her by turning toward her and murmuring. She had gotten surprisingly aroused outside, partially by her darkly erotic thoughts about the pleasure of her body, and partially, even, by Trevir's smaller, but somehow much purer erection. She moved her hand onto Harlen's waist and slowly crept it toward his own organ. She found it, hanging limply, and touched it. Harlen's eyes opened.

"Um. Hello." He said, smiling after a half second.

She squeezed his flaccid penis. "Good Evening." She said, smiling back.

"You've got my bits." He noted, raising an eyebrow.

She giggled. "So I do." She said. "I had thought you would not mind terribly."

He stretched out, and said. "I do not, but I have to confess a bit of soreness."

She patted his shoulder. "I know, the witch made you work hard for my benefit."

He gave a strained smile. "I don't know about that, but I do know that my rod is quite sore, and you giving me another erection is not helping." He touched her face. "I am sorry if you had plans." He said.

She gave him a peck on the cheek. "Not really, I was just playing, I had not even thought of you being sore, I did not realize it happened to men from overuse, as well.

He nodded. "Sadly, it does."

"Then I will leave your man alone, for this one night." She said. "But I will expect additional payment later, to make up for my loss." Her smile grew wide indeed.

"You shall get it." He said, matching her smile.

She pressed to him, and he embraced her. She felt warm again, and safe. She had some rather inappropriate thoughts outside, about many things, but they were gone now, and she just enjoyed his strong arms and his cleanly soaped smell. Soon, she, too, was asleep.

---

In the light of dawn, Hyandai awoke to find Harlen holding her in his arms once again. She was facing him this time, and she just watched his sleeping face untill he awoke. It was not terribly long before he did, people seem to know when they are watched.

"Good morning." She said, smiling.

He looked at her, and kissed the tip of her nose. "Good morning." He answered.

She giggled at that for a moment, then said. "I saw young Mister Trevir last night in his birthday suit."

"You did, did you?" He asked, his eyes wide with amaze, his smile wide as well. "And what is your elven assessment of him?"

She grinned. "He is a, shall we say, well-built boy."

"Well, imagine that." Harlen said, enjoying her naughty talk. Her face was so deliciously innocent looking, to think that she harbored rather lusty thoughts within was something of a shock sometimes, and it thrilled Harlen when she expressed them. "Should I worry?" He asked, looking down into the sheets.

She said. "Not for a few years yet, but maybe then a bit." She said, smiling. "He is likely to be your size, perhaps."

Harlen sighed. "Not even betrothed fully, and already the eyes wander." He said.

She looked at him. "That is something, seriously, you will need to learn to deal with." Her expression was not one of humor. "Elves do have eyes that look sometimes far afield." She shrugged. "It is something that is part of us, we are very sensual creatures and we demand our senses be stimulated."

Harlen laughed. "A roving eye is not a strictly elven invention." He said. "Most humans suffer the same affliction or enjoy the same blessing, depending on your viewpoint." He touched her hands. "It is where these go that concerns me, and these," he touched her lips, "and this." He slid his hand down to the bottom of her belly and over her pubic mound. "The eyes can wander freely."

"Please, do not make light of my fey." She said, her face serious. "I am partially driven by it, and on occasion, it will seize me."

He looked at her seriously now. "You mean you may be unfaithful?" He asked.

She shook her head. "No. I am faithful to you, and will always be." She said. "My heart is yours. But there is a difference between love and sex." She explained. "And while the two do intertwine, they are not nearly the same. My lusts are powerful some times, like two days ago, when I embarrassed Trevir."

He grinned at her. "You're saying you may come on to people on occasion? Flirt with them and such?"

"Yes." She said, smiling weakly. "And if they take me up on my offers of the moment, well, things may happen." She looked terribly embarrassed and worried.

"Okay." Harlen said, and regarded her seriously. "And you wish to know how I will react to that?"

"I am fairly certain you will react to that negatively." She said. "You will probably send me away." Her face was downcast now.

He chuckled. "That would be a bit crazy for me." He said. "To loose something wonderful because someone else sampled its goodness?"

She looked at him a bit confused. "You would not be upset?"

"To a point, I would, of course, be." He said, smiling at her. "But if you were a very, very fine wine, would I throw out the barrel because someone else had a glass of it at some point?"

"I am not wine, but I see your analogy." She said. "I do not plan on doing this thing. Since we will be together almost all the time, naturally, when my fey strikes, you will be the one usually at hand to take care of the ensuing results." She thought a moment. "And if I am only with people I dislike then it is easily resisted." She looked at him. "It is when I am around men I like already, and you are not, that a problem may arise. Such as two days ago."

Harlen thought on this a while. "And this is likely?" He asked.

She nodded slowly. Watching his eyes.

"I suppose, I will have to learn to forgive it, won't I?" He replied. "I'm sure as hell not giving you up, and you have now given me fair warning." He did not look terribly pleased, but he was not angry. "May I ask one thing of you, though?" He asked.

"Of course." She said, trying to smile brightly.

He said. "Keep it discreet if you must." He said. "You know us humans are a bit gossipy."

She nodded gravely. "I can always hope it will not arise, but if it should, I will try to keep it out of the public eye." She kissed his cheek. "I do not seek to embarras you or humiliate you."

He rolled onto his back and looked at the cieling. "I should have known all that perfection had a catch." He chuckled. "You're too wondrous to keep all to myself."

"Do not fear, my beloved." She said, soothingly. "The fey does not often strike, and it can be battled back, which I intend to try to do." She put her hand on his chest. "I only warn you so that you know if something unfortunate happens, that it is due in no way to some shortcoming on your part."

He grinned again. "It is an elven thing?"

"It is an elven thing." She replied.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The whiner seems an appropiate tag

So you are done whining then?

Good.

The author had been gone for 11 years, and he thus cares as little about your rants and rawings as everybody else.

ThelvynerThelvynerabout 7 years ago
Yet one more nail in this garbage's coffin.

More trials and torture with no gain. I'm done. I'm sick of this author and his sick mind. Nothing here at all to make up for all the darkness the author is inflicting on his readers. So I'm not his reader anymore. I choose not to have this filth as entertainment. Nothing good at all in this story except the technical aspect of the writing and that could just be a good editor. Author has nothing of value to offer unless you are fucked in the head too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Meh.

OK. Let me preface this with the fact that this isn't a critique of the writing or the content. For this sight the writing is still exceptional and the content is acceptable.

I get that she is a fay creature not human. So my problem is almost solely thematic. Commence my complaint and why I dropped this story. For those uninterested in reading my gripe suffice it to say this is a personal take and choice and has little to nothing to do with the skill of the author. Be warned that my complaint is strongly worded and probably a little controversial:

So what, she's a nympho at heart so he's supposed to be okay with her sleeping around!? Is he supposed to father other mens' children because he couldn't be around her every hour of every day and she got horny? How is that cool? How is that okay? I can be really understanding and in reality within proper circumstances I'd probably be willing to swallow a lot more than I'm willing to in my stories but still... First the story presents us with a very gruesome and violent rape, then a gruesome and cruel service paid for by whoring, and now I'm supposed to look forward to the main love interest going around sleeping with other men? But it's OK because she likes them and Harlen wasn't around and she was horny. That last part sounds like a part of a bad argument you might hear in a po'dunk trailer park. If she feels guilty about enjoying, even a little, the crime she was subjected to at the hands of the orcs and call herself an 'orc lover' then why is it completely without guilt that she plans on enjoying a similar act with other partners because the mood struck her while she's in a committed relationship? That's purely racist. I get that rape is bad ,believe me, but wasn't what the orc did purely an act of lust just as she plans on doing. The fact that it would be consensual puts it in a whole other league admittedly but there's still enough similarity that I still find a level of hypocrisy in it.

So to conclude I'm dropping this story because it makes me watch the characters suffer with little repayment for my sympathetic suffering and makes me live in a world that confuses and frustrates me.

That was all more strongly worded than I normally would but I had to vent. I openly admit I'm a sappy fool who adores fidelity so I get that many others might not agree or even like my assessments. I think it's worth mentioning that most stories that I drop aren't good enough to warrant me posting about it. I usually just drop it. I had really gotten into this story, this was just the last straw for me. It's a little like seeing someone you look up to do something you can't accept and you have to reject them as an idol afterwards. Your reactions way stronger than if it had been someone else. I admit I haven't read the rest so maybe the author goes in a different direction with things, in which I'm sorry but I couldn't stand to read any more.

AdonisXxXAdonisXxXover 8 years ago
*sigh* Hyandai

Okay this fey thing spells nothing but ruin. Do not mar the character man, she is perfect as she is......

SplitAcesSplitAcesover 9 years ago
I agree with Superfeluously_e

You've been doing a terrific job of fleshing out your characters; and then you pull out this crap about Hyandai's fey (temptations). Wow, she might have to battle with it. So do we all. The reason we like Hyandai's character is that she does fight her baser instincts. She wants love, not lust; and what she gets will be her choice. If not, then she is a puppet on a string, with no life of her own, at least not one worth living.

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