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Click here"Erik and Ariel," he said. "The pond and the hayloft maybe."
"It doesn't matter my love," I responded. "They are here and they are perfect. I love them and you so much."
He leaned over to kiss me once more. I felt the spark that would not die. He held each tiny head for me to kiss. With each kiss I felt a spark and grinned. "Yes," I thought, "perfect."
The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI really liked this. It was sweet, but not saccharin.
This part made me giggle: "I love you so much Ariel, and our baby. Thank you. It's the most wonderful news, the most wonderful gift. What do you think, pond or hayloft?"
SteveWallacealmost 10 years agoI'm a sucker for romance, and here you did it with room to spare. Pure five stars! Congrats and keep writing.
Tinkerbell98almost 10 years agoFirst off Cndrlla69 I must agree with Splendidspunk. I to am pretty sure that I knew who the guys at the pond were, but as you know it still took me by surprise a little bit.
And secondly, I've read all of the stories that you have posted to this site and you never cease to blow me away. After this jaw dropper I have to wonder how exactly stories like this come to brew in your head? You always seam to be able to combine the dirty and erotic side of relationships with the love and compassionate side of them too.
I know that a sequel to "The Spark" should arrive on this site in the near future.
Never let a single nasty comment discourage you from writing, for you are to amazing to stop. And you should know that you do have fans that can't wait for more of your work!
SplendidSpunkalmost 10 years agoI loved how you crafted this piece. While I think everyone knew who was at the pond that night, it still fit the tale. Romantic and sexy, well written and beautifully told. You spiced it up with sex and humor, then topped it off with love. Its always a gift to find an author who can do erotica well, thank you for posting I will look for you again. Five stars are all that is allowed but not all that was earned. Kevin
