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Click hereSheila gasps when we walk into the office, and I see Thomas go pale when he sees Ondine. I have a feeling this day just got a bit more interesting for everyone.
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Author's Notes:
Garbonzo really outdid himself editing this chapter, offering great advise, and catching quite a few things that I missed as the author. Sometimes with this whole story in my head, I tend to gloss over things that my wonderful audience doesn't already know. So once more, THANK YOU!
Also, seeing as this is the 20th chapter, I'm kind of curious. Who is your favorite character? Lemme know in the comments!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoMY favorite character is Areth, though all of your characters are interesting and well developed.
DBs_Broover 2 years agoAuthor@Ramjet57
I'm terribly sorry you went through that. I hope your future holds many great things & thanks for the comments.
Ramjet57over 2 years agoI like Lyden, Guess I'm the sympathetic type. I was abused as a child and now have PTSD from it. I did a career in the Air Force with no issues, then my Father passed and I got hit with repressed memories and it gave me Depression form PTSD. I must take a pill each day to avoid it. Was very glad to see the ladies were not actually killed. Good story, Keep it up.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI shall have to go with my gut at this point (because as several have pointed out they are all quite good and I am sure my "favorite" has changed and will change again soon enough): Sheila. I look forward to her further development. I also like Areth Miranda and AnnaBelle much.
