Sheila gasps when we walk into the office, and I see Thomas go pale when he sees Ondine. I have a feeling this day just got a bit more interesting for everyone.
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Author's Notes:
Garbonzo really outdid himself editing this chapter, offering great advise, and catching quite a few things that I missed as the author. Sometimes with this whole story in my head, I tend to gloss over things that my wonderful audience doesn't already know. So once more, THANK YOU!
Also, seeing as this is the 20th chapter, I'm kind of curious. Who is your favorite character? Lemme know in the comments!
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keep it up
i hate one line on the next page but this story is a great story with twist and turn hope to see more
areth
I adore areth, she gives the story levity
Great Chapter!
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Aerith, Angila and Lisa are my favorite.
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