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The Grand Meister turns his back on us, and suddenly our guards are back, shoving us from the massive audience chamber.
Hope abandons me, as we're separated, and I have no idea where my friends are taken. Brooke is the only other nonhuman, but I can't shake the feeling that they're not just going to let the others go after this.
Unable to talk, and too weak after my battle with Blue, I collapse on my cot, and try to get some sleep before tomorrow.
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Author's note: Garbonzo, you have done a fantastic job in editing this chapter. THANK YOU!
Also, I've been asked how Lyden knows his car is orange, when he's colorblind. Simple: being colorblind doesn't mean you see the world in black and white. It means you have a hard time identifying colors. I'm colorblind. Blue and purple look identical to me. I also have issues with red, green, and brown. I still see colors, but struggle to identify them.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agowell then, the main charakter is still stupid as hell. Get the kid back to school and slap him everyday until he learns to use his brain. Surroundet by enemies turning into an weakened dragon and then just back in all public - oh yeah, very thoughtful. The story itself got some great elements but the super-stupid idiot drops the story to "leave it, it woun't get better". So, bye bye. I've read enough.
lonewolfalphaover 8 years agoI love your story and if I had to wait on you to add new chapters I would be mad at the cliff hanger love how you have progressed with the characters and see the car going to get the Sucabuse
Anonymousover 10 years agoeach eyes a different color blindness ones red blue and blue green. awesome story waiting for the next chapter
OneIBlindover 10 years agoI find myself, like others here, waiting anxiously for the next installment of this story; only to read it and discover that I'm left with another cliff hanger! You really have mastered this tale and thanks to you also Garbonzo (no one remembers the editor but the writer)!
I'm hooked...
