Seth had discerned many things about Camille and David McKay from this ride. Indeed, his plans were just beginning.
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Very Well Written 5 Stars
Loved the description of the characters & their feelings.
I can't wait to read more about them.
My only nitpicking comment is about the car. On page 1 it is described as a Mercedes SL550 Roadster. But on page 2 as they are arriving back at the hotel it is described as a Porsche.more...
Very nice.
Deliciously erotic. Keep it coming. ; )
excellent. an unassuming and seductive story
well developed, and it draws the reader in nicely.
Well written and erotic. Do we get to see what his new plans are?
Just beautifully written
Congratulations. Up with the best erotica I've read.
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