He spread her big ass apart to force himself deeper into her pussy, resulting in deep grunts of pleasure coming from Mum's pillow. Naturally, it wasn't long until I could feel the cum rising in my balls, I turned and sprayed my seed off the balcony, hearing it splatter on the tiled patio below.
Returning to the scene on the bed I found Dad in the final throes of passion, pistoning in and out of Mum, her face looking towards me now, eyes clenched shut, the beautiful agony of the hard fucking she was receiving etched on her features, mouth quivering as she gasped, grunted and moaned with every thrust.
The wooden bedframe slapped against the wall with each forward motion, Dad must have known that I wouldn't be asleep yet and I'd hear their drunken fucking. Maybe he just didn't care, who was going to turn down sex even if their son was in the next room?
Suddenly Dad struck a pose buried to the hilt in Mum, his orgasm taking hold while he filled her hot pussy with his cum. Eventually he pulled out revealing his cock, glistening with a mixture of Mum's juices and his own cum, still slightly engorged and I had to admit it was an impressive package, Mum wasn't kidding when she was talking about 'that big dick' earlier. He was certainly longer than me but I think I had him beat in terms of girth with my thick member.
Dad lay on the bed and stroked Mum's back, she had already collapsed onto her belly and I doubted it would be long before she was asleep. Dad reached over to the switch by the bed and turned off the light, much like the curtains closing at a seedy peepshow I took that to mean the show was over and silently moved back into my bedroom. I jerked off a couple more times before I finally couldn't keep my eyes open and drifted off to sleep.
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Thanks for the update Baron, I sure hope that you can manage to overcome your struggles and find the inspiration to complete the next part of your very erotic story. I guess that being a new author can be a real challenge, but I'm sure that you will rise to it. You sound as tho' you are taking the matter very seriously, even tho' it is only erotic entertainment, which I'm sure that all the folks who fav'd your story really appreciate. Thanks again.more...
Struggling
I have to admit I am struggling with the next chapter trying to achieve the same tone of being realistic whilst still pushing the story and relationship further. I do hope to keep working on it but I'm no pro and it is frustrating to write a story when I'm not happy with it.more...
any chance of a progress report please?
Hi 'Baron', please could you give us an update with the good (or bad) news of how things are going with the next part(s) of your hot story? Thanks.
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Hello 'Baron' and thanks for the update! It was good to know that you are still on the case :) I would say tho, please don't put yourself under any pressure for what at the end of the day is only entertainment, altho excellent entertainment I must admit! I'm sure you'll get there in the end, we're all rooting for you :)more...
Further patience, sorry!
My apologies for not meeting the Christmas deadline. I have been struggling with some aspects of writing the next chapter, but I am slowly getting through them, and I should have more time for writing now that the holidays are over. As ever I welcome feedback whether public or private.more...
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