- Gay Male
- The Waiting Game
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Hal smiled, eyes still closed. "Oh, I totally intend to, don't think I'm not. We're going down every aisle, Sir."
"Oh, lovely," Mac groaned.
Hal hid his face in the pillow and grinned. He might not be a Dom, but he sure knew what made his Dom groan in pain.
The End
- COMMENTS
Haphaestion2004almost 9 years agoFor a while now, I've been avidly reading stories that are based on BDSM, which is something I used to swear I would never be attracted to (today I'm all for SSC !) .... I still have a lot to learn about the lifestyle - and, quite honestly, I'm still scared shitless about it - I could never understand the pursuit of pleasure through pain, and some things I read in the past, were violent to the extreme which I found abhorrent and sickening - I actually ended up in tears, because I read about the total subjugation of a man, who was repeatedly mauled and left bleeding (and accepted it !) because he happened to love the bastard that was hurting him - I JUST CANNOT UNDERSTAND SOMETHING SO SICK ... !!
But anyway, your story showed me this world through different lenses - not pink, just different - because I got that both Dom and Sub really loved each other and their Power Exchange was well placed in the consensuality of their relationship. I absolutely loved your story and would think it amazing if you could give us a sequel. When we fall in love with the characters, we don't want to let them go, and this couple is hot as hell ! I wish I could give you 10 stars. You do deserve them ! :)))
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI would love to see more gay bdsm stories. You wrote them so well. Please continue this story. Or write another bdsm story please!
smexykitten234over 9 years agoI agree with the comment below. I would so read every part of this if it bacame a series. I love guy on guy bdsm relationships. I don't get to read much of them.
Anonymousover 9 years agoPLEASE TURN THIS INTO A SERIES WITH A BACK-STORY. WOULD TO READ ABOUT THE REST. AND HOW HE GOT INTO AN S&M BUSINESS WITH LEATHER. AND HOW DID HAL & MAC MEET ? AND START THEIR DOM-SUB RELATIONSHIP. AND WHAT DOES THE REST. LOOK LIKE AND SMELL LIKE FROM ALL THE DIFFERENT FOODS BEING COOKED. AND MAYBE ADD IN SOME OF HAL'S FAVORITE RECIPE'S WE COULD MAKE OURSELVES ? WHO KNOWS YOU COULD DO A SPIN-OFF OF HAL'S COOKBOOK. SO MANY POSSIBILITIES, HUH ! SNEAKY AREN'T I ? GIVING YOUR BRAIN MORE WORK ! HA ! HA !
erotikpassionsalmost 10 years agoJust amazing how easily a writer could make a clueless reader fall in love with a different kind of love and loving 'cos ask me and I have no idea about this lifestyle but the story is amazing.
