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"Rule Two. No mention of the attack on me. You can tell her to talk to me if she wants to know what really happened to make me leave her. You can deny I went off with someone else. I didn't. You can tell her I can prove that I didn't. So she mustn't know I've been attacked. Yes?"
They nodded.
"Rule Three. Do not give her any information she doesn't ask for. Answer questions. Don't volunteer. Understood?"
They nodded.
"If she asks if I am with another woman at the moment boys, you don't know that. Greta does. Refer Mum to Greta. But you can see, there's no one living here with me at the moment.
"Please boys," I pleaded, "don't let me down on this. You could destroy a lot of good work the police are doing finding out who did this to me. OK?"
For the first time since they arrived, Jan came round the table and hugged me. I was touched. It was not easy for a teenager to do. Stefan took that as permission and came round and sat on my knee, his arm round my neck. I blinked back the tears. Greta's eyes were watering. We were a family again, fractured, but a family.
It was time for them to go. As they left they hugged me and Greta kissed my cheek.
"Greta," I whispered. "Come back soon. Things to tell you."
She nodded and smiled and they were gone.
I like this story, but I keep finding Allan to be a quite despicable character in the way he has previously treated his children and in how he is currently treating his ex-wife, or I should say - the blame he is hurling on her for being obviously duped by Derek. I mean, it's FUCKING OBVIOUS. It was obvious by like chapter 2 or chapter 3. I know that this is somewhat a limitation of the story teller here, but it rankles me that everyone has been so thick until they had solid evidence. Oh well, I guess we'll be able to go, "FINALLY YOU THICK IDIOT!" when he finds out the truth.
I know I say a lot of negative comments, but I think they go where they belong. This story is not one of them.
A really great yarn, well told and well written. Just a few silly mistakes which is allowable, unless you are perfect like me. :)
Just felt I had to leave a comment as this story is too good and I hated that no-one had commented.
Such an enjoyable and absorbing read. Enough said. Onto the next chapter.