"I'm really sorry guys." she said, her voice shaking, "I hope you know that."
Dave kissed the top of her head.
"It's ok, it's behind us now. It all worked out."
"Yeah, you more than made up for it Sarah." Colleen added, "Thank you for that, you proved your commitment and your love for me and Dave. We won't forget that."
She leaned over and kissed Sarah.
"We forgive you."
Sarah teared up again and buried her face back in Dave's shoulder to hide it.
Colleen smiled at Dave and gave him a peck too. Then with a smirk she said;
"Now the real fun begins."
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you did well a good twist
Get over yourself!
"I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics."
Spare me your pretentiousness (yeah, I know big English words too).
To the author...great job. Enjoyed reading this story.more...
I thought it was fantastic, I have been following these for a while now, very excited to see how it continues.
love it more chapters please
Poor use of language prevented me from reading past the first two paragrpahs
I know some people feel rebellious about not learning to write properly in English, but you must at least learn the basics.
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