"I know. I just want to be with you for the rest of my life and..." She cut herself off at that point.
I looked over at her deeply into the eyes and said "and what sweetheart?"
She took a deep breath before she answered "and bear your children."
"You want to have children? With me?" I said unbelievably.
"Yes." She replied as she grinded herself on me again. "Besides, with what we've been doing lately, and probably will continue to do, we probably will."
"Yea" I replied. I always wanted to be a father and secretly, I wanted to knock up my sister. Now that I might be doing it, I held her very tightly. "You will be an excellent momma Rach. Relax. If we are here for a long period of time, we'll do what we can. I will always protect you no matter what sweetheart."
"I know David. I know." She put her head on me and somewhat rolled off. She was lying on her side and I could tell she was scared of everything.
I was scared as well but I was also joyful about a possible future with her. I looked at her as she laid there and gave her a kiss on her forehead. I didn't say anything more but I didn't have to. She already knew. Our lives are officially different now and we both just wanted to be with each other. We didn't want anyone else.
TO BE CONTINUED
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can't read any more
The dialogue in this story has to be the most contrived and phony sounding of anything I have ever read before. And I do mean ever..
Research
Hope you read and take this comment seriously if you are going to base your entire series on a topic such as survival, do some research before using it. Per example the survival skills of the brother start rustic, then turn amazing and just down right stupid at times. Understand this story and all stories on this site are about sex, but the back story is just as important. If it is inconsistent, unrealistic and blotchy then it makes it hard for the reader to get into the story line to enjoy the other parts.more...
Dad?
Sorry to be a stickler, but in the first chapter you said the dad is deceased now he's out looking for them? Hmmm.... Other than that I really enjoyed it.
A great step-up from chapter 1, now I'm actually looking forward to more!
clearedtofuck, it's a habit unfortunately
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