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"I feel the same way Zac. When you saved my life, I never thought it would end up like this. I still remember the shooting star and the wish I made. Do you?" Jon asked.
"I am living my wish" said Zac.
"So am I" replied Jon. "So am I."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoLoved every word of this story. There just could not have been any other way for this story to end. Thank you so so much!!!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoAbsolutely a beautiful story and I could have fallen for any one of the four gorgeous guys.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYES THAT IS A REAL GREAT STORY PITY IT WAS CONCLUDED IN 5 SHORT CHAPTERS.? THAT COULD HAVE BEEN A FULL THIRTY CHAPTERS.? ALSO CANT YOU FOLLOW IT UP WITH THE KIDS GOING AT IT TOO.? BIG J
canndabout 9 years agoi loved the way you took us on the canoe trip too ...the way you described the scenery was cool without being 'too much'. I thought it was a great story. You should do Todd and Damien's story
