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Tina lowered her legs and entwined them with his as he pulled his softening dick from her ass and collapsed next to her. She snuggled up next to Dan's heaving chest. Her last thought was of the shooting star she had wished on earlier that night. Shooting stars couldn't really grant wishes.....or could they?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoThe Wish is a lovely little romance story; the problem is that it is too little. It certainly needs to be continued- the writing is excellent, the characters are interesting and appealing, the plot is engaging, and the all too brief love scene is one of great feeling and tenderness.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoGreat stuff - I hope you continue to write. You've got some talent!
