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His smile was gentle. "Good. Now show me where you bleed."
Alluna hesitated, but then opened her thighs to him. "Th-there."
He just stared at the juncture of her thighs. When his eyes finally looked back into hers, she noticed that his pupils had dilated wide making the blue of his eyes seem darker. "Touch where the blood flows from."
Alluna reached down and touched her finger to the tiny hole between her legs. It made her shiver.
"Do you know what that is, Alluna?"
"I-it's my pee-hole."
Zak bit his lip as if trying not to laugh. "Baby, that's not your pee-hole. It's your vagina."
"What?"
"Your vagina. Where... it's what makes you a girl. Your bleeding is completely natural, but I can fix that if you don't like it."
"Y-you can cure me?"
"I can." He put his hand on her knee, gazing between her open thighs again. There was a strange hunger in his expression that made her want to spread her legs wider for him. The impulse confused her and made her close them instead.
Sapphire eyes lifted to hers again, gazing at her from beneath gold tipped lashes. He licked his lips, the flash of pink making her own mouth flood with saliva. "Now I'm going to show you what makes me... male."
Alluna gulped.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoI love your stories and reread them when my life is not going anywhere and i want to escape reality. Thank you so much for your stories.
Lavonyaabout 8 years agopoor girl..... not knowing anything......
Damn You Zak... You better not do what I think your gonna do!!!!!
I can't believe that any one would lock their child away like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TrixieFirecracker69almost 9 years agoI've been giving you straight fives because I'm a big fan. I have all three of your books and plan on getting your revised version of Fallen. To the annonymous who slammed Angel of Ret, if you'd read Dark Prince, you would've seen Remi trying to shmooze Rowie, so you're the mean one for criticising when you haven't read the whole series.
LevanaHyllalmost 9 years agoAuthorA little bit of a spoiler: Alluna was stolen away from her true parents by someone who had (bad) alterior motives. Don't want to get too much into the WHYS because it'll definintely ruin a few upcoming events that are about to rock these characters world. This PERSON that stole Alluna didn't really care about her. Alluna was just groomed to develop her special capabilities, become somewhat powerful and help capture representations of the fallen angel, Davariel's disciples for a ritual. Alluna never learned about the anatomical differances between sexes, she has absolutely no concept of sex, nor understanding of morality/decency. To her, what she has between her legs is just used to eliminate waste. Think for a moment how uninhibited a one-year-old is and you can compare that to Alluna's mindset. The person who stole her made her think her body was ugly and deformed. That is Alluna's only issue with herself. Zak fascinates her; his size, coloring, his very masculinty. She's been alone almost all her life and here's this exotic creature making her promises of companionship and care. That's what's she's always craved.
As for Zak, Seth is right. Alluna inadvertantly cast a spell on him. That's why he feels so obsessed. A few chapters from now he begins to realize this...the question is, can Zak love Alluna for real? Or will his feelings for her vanish once the spell wears off?
Bellinialmost 9 years agoThis story really has potential, but I just don't but that a girl who has been locked in a tower her whole life is going to be ok with getting introduced to sex in this manner. Have her stay with one of the women, have her spend some time learning about what she doesn't know, during that time build her attraction to Zak. It seems that you want to write story that are more than just good material for getting off, so don't rush to the sexy times. Just make sure they are spectacular when you get to them.
