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Click here"Yeah, right!" I say, as I walk around him, letting my hand rub across his bare, muscular stomach, my thumb momentarily slipping inside his belly button, my others fingers rubbing much lower, slipping across the waistline of his shorts, my fingers now wet with his perspiration, feeling the taut muscles of his stomach; my guilt seeming to have dissipated quickly. "No, I think I better change. I'll meet you out front in ten minutes," I say as I walk into the house, excitement again rushing through my body.
Or seven! I thought the guys would get to her as soon as she hung-up. Now, I can't wait to see what they are planning for lunch!
Can't wait to see where this goes...even better than the first.
Even better than the first part! Your writing is wonderfully detailed, the plot is exciting, and the overall story works to perfection!
I read chapter 1 the other day and was very excited to see chapter 2 now posted. I love the detailed descriptions of what Cheryl is wearing--or not wearing--and her feelings about being observed by others. I'm hoping she changes into something ridiculously slutty and revealing to go to the burger joint. Can't wait for chapter 3!
This story is tantalizing, and paced very effectively. I certainly thought we'd see Jim nail her in this installment, given where the story seemed to be going. But, I thought you did a very good job of building the story and effectively adding the element of a phone call from her husband into the mix. I'd love to see further installments of this story. Definitely some effective writing, and enjoyable.