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Click here"Mmmm, I want your come," Fanny pleaded, and her tongue gathered as much of the thick sauce as she could reach. The African helped by using the head of his dick to spoon it into her mouth. Fanny eagerly took the massive purple head into her mouth time and again to receive another taste of the musky fluid. The big man signaled one of the native girls to approach, and he gave some commands in their strange clicking language. The slender brown girl bent over Fanny and licked up the come that lay on her neck and breast, and shared a very sloppy kiss with the blonde teenager.
After that, the rest of the village men had their way with the young English girl. Mostly they followed the pattern set by the first pair of ravishers, fucking her simultaneously in pussy and throat, then coming in her mouth or on her face. Each of the men's cocks was nearly as big, and in some cases bigger, than the first warriors who defiled her. Some chose to come deep in Fanny's vagina, leaving her fuckhole filled to the brim with wiggling spermatozoa. The last to fuck her was a slim young lad with scarcely a hair on his smooth body, but with a cock the size of the blonde's forearm. He eased his big tool inside her almost reverently, before humping her like an animal and shooting an enormous load in her face.
After all the men had come on or in the blonde teen at least once, the ceremony degenerated into an all-out orgy. Fanny was untied and carried from the bench, only to be staked to the ground spread-eagle. The villagers then began to fuck each other in every position imaginable. As each male pumped his load of semen into a dusky snatch, the Negress would then squat over Fanny's mouth to have the gooey white stuff sucked out by the beautiful white English girl. By the time the lust of the villagers was spent the bonfire had burned down to a pile of glowing embers. In their soft reddish light the lovely Fanny Chamberlain could be seen, her body smeared with the sex juices of more than thirty native savages, a look of contented fulfillment on her face.
You should have kept it with "natives," I stopped reading as soon as you switched in one sentence from using "native" to using "African" after saying they were on a "dark continent." Makes me wonder if your unconscious racism is poking through in your writing.
You cannot say "African" when the people in your story don't know where the hell they are.
I liked that you went so far into the details and used a rich language. But I didn't like some of your choices of words. They were outdated, sexist and racist. Why are stories like this one always that stereotypical? Same old same old.
The story was alright. But honestly, I wouldn't read it again. I like your other stories, this one just didn't do anything for me.
Just a barely literate version of the worst b/w gang rape porn sites on the internet. A kind of Jane does Africa while Tarzan watches. Hot I suppose, but ordinary at best. I quess I'm just not into the whole BDSM/non-consent scene...Someday I would like to interview a man and/or woman who is, just to get a more objective point of view. Another thing is...I'm just not comfortable with the names and descriptions the author used with the tribe members. I mean "spear-chucker"? Deliberately insulting...and grossly outdated...
Great Story, write another chapter...let's see what happens to Fanny.