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There Must Be A Mistake
Chapter 5
By
Prolonged_Debut10
P.S. : I lied to you. Actually, I lied to you twice. I am extremely sorry about that.
Lie 1. I told you after Chapter 4 I was going to take some time off before writing Chapter 5. I just couldn't do it. This story is rattling around in my brain, and will not let me rest. If I can't rest, I may as well write. So here is Chapter 5, I hope you enjoy it.
Lie 2. At the very beginning I told you this was going to be a SHORT STORY, possibly four or five chapters. Since you have just finished reading Chapter 5, and you know that a bomb has yet to explode, there has got to be a Chapter 6, and possibly 7. If it gets to Chapter 8, I am going to shoot this computer. That way I will have to save my money and buy a new one. That will take at least one or two days, during which time I can rest, really and truly rest.
P.P.S.S.: I received a very funny comment on chapter 4 that I wish to relay to you. It stated that he/she had seen my request at a previous time looking for an experienced editor and wished to apply for that position. The person said he/she qualified for that position and had the time available to do it well. I was very interested in this proposal, but there was only one MINOR PROBLEM; the author signed it: ANONYMOUS. Oh well, you can't win them all.
Chapter 6 will appear in 3 to 4 weeks after the publication of Chapter 5. ENJOY!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoGood story but I feel Even and the Jennifer meeting is a bit too believable. If the boy has a high IQ I will have to shoot my boots.
Jipsy6 months agoI'm getting so very tired saying I love your story, characters and humor!
This sorry is just too good
Ravey19about 1 year agoBasic errors that should be picked up at proof reading stage, no good relying on Word or whatever to check spelling if it's not the correct word. But amazing story telling and long instalments each time so an enormous amount of effort has been expended writing this. Still t ⛤
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYou need a Roz to do a proof reading. As every so often, you have a wrong word,e.g. been instead of be. The misspelling of words such as colour, we will let you off as the the story is set in the USA and they do not write in English!
daypowerover 7 years agoPostscript and Post-Postscript
But what does your last S mean?
Anywho
Enjoying the story so far keep up the good work :)
