His apprehension was at its peak. When Ann felt his bottom a few moments earlier, he had winced. His discomfort was genuine and extensive. The brush had done everything Ann had expected and more than Cal could comprehend. And now a whipping!
Ann stood back and looked at her helpless husband. Arms tied, pants around his ankles, shirt in his mouth and bottom awaiting the switch. She drew back and let the first lash land smartly. Cal jumped. He thought the brush was bad, but this was far worse. The first stroke landed across the middle of his bottom and the tip wrapped around his side, finishing on the side of his right thigh. The second was just as crisp and was delivered without any delay. It too found his bottom, although lower than the first and wrapped lower onto the same thigh. This one felt like fire. Out of instinct, Cal twisted to his right. When the third stroke was completed, the tip of the switch landed squarely on his butt and finished with deep penetration.
The sensation was unlike anything he had experienced. Fire and an electric shock combined. Cal was in trouble, but without any option. Ann paused after the third lash and ran her hand across Cal's wounded behind. She was surprised at the results. The switch had performed well. The welts were raised and extended from one cheek across to the other and around his side. Each welt was a combination of two ridges of flesh divided by a valley of skin where the switch landed. The ridges were thick and raised, the result of devastating lashes.
'Not enough', Ann thought. She looked into her husbands' eyes and, for the first in their marriage, saw the man she loved totally helpless. 'Perfect', she thought as she opened her lips and said, "From now on...you will obey me! Or else you will feel my new power over you. Do you understand?" she said softly. Cal nodded his head and in doing so, caused the tears in his eyes to roll down his cheeks.
"Have you had enough?" Ann asked. Cal nodded quickly.
Ann smiled. "But I have not".
"You will take more because I want to give them to you" she hissed. "You will do so, now and any time forward, in any manner and in any place I wish. Is that clear?" she asked, already knowing the answer. Cal continued his total submission by again acknowledging affirmatively.
Ann looked into his eyes as she stepped back into the darkness. She drew back the switch as far as her frame would allow and delivered the fourth stroke with all her might. Cal shuddered and moaned through the shirt, still clenched tightly between his teeth. The fifth and sixth lashes were vicious and wrought fire to the lower half of Cal's body. Ann duplicated the effort for the seventh and eighth strokes. On the ninth, Cal couldn't help but respond with a low guttural cry. This was Cal's third mistake of the evening.
Cal and Ann's next-door neighbor, Hillary, was enjoying the cool Arizona evening and heard the sharp cracks and then a noticeable moan. She recognized the sound of a caning. Hillary looked over the fence, in the direction of the sound and saw Cal suspended from the tree, naked from his shoulders to his ankles. At the moment Hillary realized what was happening, Ann landed the tenth blow. Cal twisted away from the switch in a helpless effort to avoid the burning inflicted by the wicked instrument. Hillary watched with pleasure.
Ann walked around to Cal's right side in order to continue the onslaught but to better balance the punishment. As Ann stepped around, she saw Hillary looking over the fence. At first she was shocked and embarrassed, but quickly regained her focus on the job she intended to finish with conviction. Ann paused a moment, looking back at Hillary and by eye contact, acknowledged her presence. Ann lined up for the grand finale. She delivered the eleventh lash with all the effort she could muster. In doing so, she realized how hard she had worked that evening and recognized how tired her arm truly was. The twelfth stroke exceeded the previous eleven and caused Cal to cry out loud. This was something neither Cal nor Ann had ever experienced. Ann was determined to finish strongly. She drew back the cane and delivered the thirteenth and final blow, causing Cal to gag on his shirt.
Ann was exhausted. Cal was a blubbering hulk. Hillary, fondly recalling a former life, was aroused at her neighbor. How she would react to Ann the next time they saw each other, ran through her mind.
Ann laid down the switch and hugged her husband, still suspended by the rope from the tree. Cal cried like a child. She felt the target of the punishment and was astounded at the devastation. His flesh was laden with thick welts, each entirely separate and extending from one side completely across each cheek. Ann comforted him for a while before releasing the rope and untying his wrists. She helped Cal lower his shirt back to his waist and raise his underwear and pants. Cal sobbed as his wife hugged him and kissed his neck.
Ann was proud of her husband for withstanding the onslaught. She was even more proud of her performance and despite feeling drained, felt empowered by her new position in control of their marriage.
Hillary continued to watch as the couple gathered their jackets from the pool furniture and disappeared into their bedroom. Knowing firsthand the impact of such a severe caning, she speculated they would only cuddle for hours.
Hillary would be right and she began to plot how she might join Ann in Cal's disciplinary training.
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A Need For Revenge!
Maybe the wimp is a submissive and desires to be punished BUT,this was way too much!
A few days later,Ann & Hillary were found a hundred feet from an isolated country road. The medical examiner determined that the cause of death for each was being whipped and caned several hundred times each.
Fuck this shit!!!more...
I can hardly wait
Until the next chapter. How will she deal with her neighbor's interest? Five stars!
Exceptional first story
Your writing is very good; much better than I could achieve. Please take my comments as constructive and not as criticism.
The negative:
It is very rare for a man to cry, regardless of the pain. I have only cried when pain was coupled with very deep remorse for the actions that caused the need for a spanking. Having said that, when I did cry I needed a lot of after care and was not fit for going out afterwards. Crying for a man is a emotional release that is very deep and not easily recovered from.
Not making a sound when being strongly spanked, has to be learned- it requires a lot of discipline and practice. If this was his first disciplinary spanking he probably would have been howling or very loudly grunting through his clinched teeth. I usually bite into a hand towel and even then you can hear my grunts far into the house.
Whipping with a switch hard enough to raise welts is hard enough to cut the skin where the tip touches around the side. Please remember, when the switch hits the bottom and the tip is still wrapping around the side, the tip is still accelerating, so when the tip makes contact it is going to do more damage. It is very easy to cause severe damage. Caning is usually "practiced" before actually used for a severe scene. My wife caned me several times at partial strength before she actually went "full speed." and she has still accidently cut me several times. It is very easy to cause real damage even going half strength. There are some videos on the web where the women go full strength and you can see that only a very practiced submissive can take the pain.
As mentioned by another commenter, a safe word is really needed at the beginning of the relationship. At this point, neither partner is certain of the limits, so there is a real need (at least at the beginning) for a "kill switch." Think of a safe word as the way to ensure that you have not crossed that invisible line between consent and abuse. My wife and I still use a safe word, because you never know what could happen. For instance, I have a damaged shoulder; where a pinched nerve can happen for no good reason. I can assure you that when that nerve makes its presence known, the pain from a spanking is the least of my concerns.
The positive:
The wife shows that she loves her husband. Too many of these types of stories have the wife as a cold hearted wench. Only a masochist would stay married to them. I would never submit to anyone other than my wife and I submit because I know that she loves me and only wants what is best.
You make it clear that she warned her husband long before she took action. I think a lot of time women nag, because they feel like they have lost control. Spanking a husband gives her control. By making it clear that the husband was warned numerous times prior to the event, makes it realistic.
You mention aftercare. I would develop this part more in future stories, but you clearly show that aftercare was given. For me aftercare is as important if not more important than the actual spanking. Remember the wife has physically hurt her husband, he needs reassurance that she did it out of love instead of revenge. The first time I cried, my wife had to hold me for a very long time. Crying was a new experience that caused me to doubt myself. I really needed to know that my remorse that caused the crying was not misinterpreted as weakness. Also I needed to know that she really loved me and forgave the action that created the need for the spanking. Aftercare creates a bond that very hard to replicate in any other manner. It is very similar (but different) to post coital cuddling. A hard and long spanking without aftercare is very much like a long sex session and then immediately leaving the hotel room. People that love each other do not do that.
You mentioned that the husband encouraged her dominance. Very few FLR relationships are initiated by the wife. I initiated it in my relationship and we went very slow, because she was reluctant. It was only after she saw the benefits, did she fully get on board. One of the benefits I mentioned earlier, is that it gave her control that she felt that she had lost.
You detail that her husband works hard and has put their relationship second. Successful people have to work hard but it is easy to get out of balance. My job requires a lot of long and uncertain hours. I always have to remember that "I make the living and my wife makes life worth living." By allowing my wife to spank me, it keeps us in alignment.
Missing:
When you begin a FLR you really need a post spanking discussion. Both parties know that the relationship has changed at the foundational level, but don't really know what the other spouse is thinking. The wife needs to be reassured that she hasn't stepped over the line and the husband needs to know that he hasn't lost his wife's respect. Men need respect. It is part of our DNA. If a man feels that he has lost respect, he will either seek to regain it or drift into areas that aren't very pretty. One of the main reasons that FLRs work is because both spouses talk more and delve deeper into their emotions and thoughts. Almost every time I have been spanked, we have talked about what it meant, what caused it, and how much we love each other. Our relationship is much closer because of these discussions.more...
good, but
Remember to always use a safe word. "You're going to take it until I'm finished" is never a good policy, and can result in serious injuries.
A wonderful first story!
Not quite perfect, as ham_sandwich has already said, but very, very good! I look forward to your making this a series -- you write so well.
Congratulations on your first, welcome to Literotica, and please bring us more soon!
Five stars ;) !more...
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